This is an amazing story. Please update soon!! Report Review
Like you said yourself in the author's note things are greatly exaggerated. Both Ron and Hermione's reactions AND Lucius' attitude. 8/10Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, I'm trying to edit all the chapters and I'm in the process of rewriting everything! Report Review
Erm...I can't help feeling like the trio's reaction was a bit too much, Hermione's in particular (is there a bit of DM/HR in this fic?). But it's really interesting that Draco has a good feeling about N (I suppose it's because his mother's name starts with it?). I'm enjoying reading this fic on the whole. 8/10Author's Response: Thank you, I don't know if you'll ever get to the further chapters where you'll see their reasons, but... I do think that it's overdone, definitely exaggerated. But thank you for commenting anyway! Wow, I didn't even think about his mother's name starting with N... I had this gut instinct, and I guess I was right to follow it! Report Review
I love long chapters. I hope you don't split them up because then it's an even longer wait to read something you already typed. Where ever your mind takes you for this story I will follow. LOL. I love this story for sure though and can't wait till you update again. :)Author's Response: Thank you! Whew! That's a lot less work for me! I can just let my imagination soar, without worrying about how long/short my chapters are... Thanks again! Report Review
This is really amazing. I can't wait to read the rest of it!Author's Response: ^^ Haha, thanks! Banishment's up, so... hope you enjoy it :D Report Review
I love your story but PLEASE post more!!Author's Response: Chapter eight is being validated :D Report Review
I really like your story. Yes it's depressing, but interesting all the same and hopefully it won't end depressing. If it does though it's still good. I thought you did a pretty good job of writing even though you had writers block. It gave background information to better understand the characters and I didn't think it was a wasted chapter. Hope you update soon. :)Author's Response: Thanks, jaceni! The next chapter is up, I think. You gave me quite a bit of inspiration to write more! I've got it all planned out, and no, it won't end depressing (hopefully), so... Thanks so much!!! Chapter nine is also completely written. Report Review
I love love love this story! Your words are so intoxicating! I love your choice of poems and and quotes you have intergrated in to your work! I can not wait for your next chapters!!!Author's Response: Thank you SO much!!! Yeah, I spend so much time on finding poems and quotes, and they're all such beautiful poems from such genius poets... I just hoped that by distributing these, not only does it give a great intro to the chapter, but it'd inspire people to read some of these poets' works. Thanks again for reviewing :) Report Review
You literally brought me to tears. I almost couldn't handle Harrys' emotions. And I love the friendship between "Nick" and Jensen. The unbiased opinion of a child, the loyalty and trust that is so well captured and described in Jensen. And then there's Draco, *sigh. My thumb starts tingling whenever I get anxious or overly emotional, and that's what happened during this whole chapter.
You have quite a story brewing at your fingertips missy, and I must tell you that it is thus far... phenomenal. Please don't stop and please update again soon.Author's Response: Haha, wow, you have no idea how GREAT it felt to read this review. I'm... wow... I actually don't have any words to describe how I feel, but I guess I could use 'thrilled'... to know that this story could evoke such an emotion!!! ;)
And I know what you mean about Draco, *scream*! People at school think I'm crazy because I walk around with a sign (literally) on my bag with his name all over it...
Well, I will definitely keep going... Chapter seven's a real... bummer... Writer's block, but I'm gradually working my way through it.
Thanks again! Report Review
Man I need an update! lol. Please do so asap! Very deep story, very good! =]Author's Response: Newest chapter updated :) Report Review
I like it so far. I don't like the story changing scenes constantly but I'm sure it's necessary =] I'll keep reading!Author's Response: Haha, yeah, it's got a lot happening at once, it's sort of confusing at times... but hopefully it'll settle a bit later on... Ooh! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Good job so far, I enjoyed reading. But I think that Harry Hermione and Ron reacted too much when they found out that Draco had died... they had never realy cared for him so deeply, I just find that a bit strange.
:)Author's Response: Um, yeah... Actually in Chapter four and onwards, it explains everything a little more detailed and why they 'overreacted' which they didn't really do... Report Review
I am really loving this. I now get the whole background and can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Chapter seven is busy being written... Poor thing, it's going through so much editing! Report Review
I am much more satisfied after this chapter. It makes a little more sense that Ron wants to find Draco so he can beat him, but what makes him think he is not dead?Author's Response: Um... actually, Ron doesn't want to beat Draco up. He's doing what he's doing (finding the BODY) to ease up some of the guilt in his chest... because he thinks he's the reason why Draco 'committed suicide'. Report Review
This chapter was a bit confusing to me. I wasn't sure what the timeline was, or why Ron all of a sudden was so upset. I understood Hermione's response and Harry's, but Ron seemed a little off.
I still like the story though!Author's Response: Haha, yeah. I didn't really think it was that confusing when I was writing it, but when I checked up on it again, the timeline is a little bit off... Um, hopefully Chapters 4+ will make up for it? Report Review
This is a great story and I wonder how Hermione will fall in love!! I think the idea of Draco's suicide is realistic in terms of what we saw at the end of DH.Author's Response: :) Thank you!! You'll see in Chapter Six! (Wink, wink!) Report Review
That was awesome!! You totally fixed those minor things I commented on :-) anyway keep it up!! And why was hermione trying to kill herself? Just wondering. You rock!!Author's Response: Thanks :) You, so far, must be my best reviewer! You've complimented and criticised my fanfic very well, so... thanks so much! Report Review
Ok, so i am slightly confused as to why hermione and harry and ron are sad for draco's death as you said in your after note. but i am sure it will be explained later on right? ok, so i think this is REALLY GOOD!! you are doing a great job, but maybe you could let ron and hermione think some more as to why they are doing the things they are doing. Also...could you describe the settings a little more? please, i know its not my place to ask but i just think it needs a little more description. Other than that, THIS IS BLOODY AMAZING!!! 100/10 ;-)Author's Response: Thanks so much ^^
I will definitely take your advice! I'm so glad you like it. Report Review
Oh my goodness! A very well done chapter. I can't wait till the next update.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I will update soon. Report Review
WOW... thats unexpected!Author's Response: Haha, then mission accomplished! Report Review
OH. MY. GOD. And you say I'm brilliant?!
That was amazing! Draco's emotions...the regret...the angst...everything!
10/10! :DAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks, Beatrice.
(PS> YOU REALLY ARE BRILLIANT) Report Review
Wow...that was a really good chapter. I'm kind of confused as to why Hermione and Ron were so affecte by Draco's supposed death. And why does Ron feel that it's the least he can do to look for Draco's body? Just a couple questions. Anyway, keep up the great work and I hope you update soon.
BGAuthor's Response: Okey dokes! Will add why soon (*Wink wink)
Thanks for the review!
I did have a new chapter written, but I'm not sure if I wanna upload it.
Will upload soon. Report Review
wow. that was deep dude. lol sry i had 2 use that word. Check out 1 of mi stories that just came out...I luv reviews!!! :)Author's Response: Thanks, Beatrice! Shall do, and shall review! Report Review
ooohhh! you really need to write more! good job, it's really interesting!Author's Response: Thank you, amanda! Report Review
O...M...G...you have an amazing gift. I was drawn into this story so much. It is so good! Please update soon! I'm really looking forward to reading more!
Oh, and I would love it if you could make me a banner for Changes. That would be so great! Thanks!
BGAuthor's Response: Hey there!
Thanks a bunch ^^ ^^
Anyway, I made a banner for you. It's not that great, and I was going insane, wondering if I should put Edward in it too???
So, tell me if you want me to make a banner with Edward in it, if he's a main character. Or if you want me to use Emma Watson in the banner. Well, cheerios. ^^
Erm... The Link can't be sent via this, so... I'll message you the link. ^^ Report Review
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