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Review #1, by Val Cruel

14th June 2009:
What? How did she die?? lol.
That was really good! 10-10 =D

Author's Response: I have imagined her die because of a Death Eater attack or someting like that. Im glad you liked it though! :)
Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #2, by Phoenix_Flames Cruel

19th February 2009:
Hello, there! I'm here with your review!

This was a great story. I really, really enjoyed it. It was gripping.

I don't have much to tell you besides I came across a few mistakes and this could use a little read over, but this was a wonderful story. I very much enjoyed it. :)


Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing so soon! It means a lot. :)
Im really, really happy you enjoyed this story! It was rather experimental for me. Thanks again for stoping by and leaving your opinion!

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Review #3, by Kathy Cruel

7th February 2009:
That's so cute. And sad. In nearlty every story Sirius' girlfriend dies. Oh well love the advice at the end , i'm sure many a person could use it.
Kat xoxo

Author's Response: Hello!
Im really glad you enjoyed it. I always thought that since Sirius has no-one in the jk books, he must have lost someone before that. I really wanted the characters way of life to stand out and the life they had before we met them.
Anyway, thanks for the review! :)

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Review #4, by Muninn Cruel

19th January 2009:
I liked this story. There are some typos. "when she doesnít even have the simplest decency to be hones with me!" should be "honest with me" and "It was a wile before I understood that there was nothing I could blame anyone for" should be "it was a while". Anyway, I liked story. I liked Abigails voice a lot; it sounds very real and I can sympathise with her problems. I enjoyed looking at the world through her eyes.

Author's Response: Hello!
First of all, sorry if the typos made the story difficult to read. Im afraid I miss a lot of them even when i double check the story for mistakes.

Anyway, thank you for reviewing! Im so glad that you liked the story-line. I really wanted Abby to be something else. It feels good knowing that I made her sound real and human.

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