What? How did she die?? lol.
That was really good! 10-10 =DAuthor's Response: I have imagined her die because of a Death Eater attack or someting like that. Im glad you liked it though! :)
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This was a great story. I really, really enjoyed it. It was gripping.
I don't have much to tell you besides I came across a few mistakes and this could use a little read over, but this was a wonderful story. I very much enjoyed it. :)
9/10Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing so soon! It means a lot. :)
Im really, really happy you enjoyed this story! It was rather experimental for me. Thanks again for stoping by and leaving your opinion! Report Review
That's so cute. And sad. In nearlty every story Sirius' girlfriend dies. Oh well love the advice at the end , i'm sure many a person could use it.
Kat xoxoAuthor's Response: Hello!
Im really glad you enjoyed it. I always thought that since Sirius has no-one in the jk books, he must have lost someone before that. I really wanted the characters way of life to stand out and the life they had before we met them.
Anyway, thanks for the review! :)
I liked this story. There are some typos. "when she doesn’t even have the simplest decency to be hones with me!" should be "honest with me" and "It was a wile before I understood that there was nothing I could blame anyone for" should be "it was a while". Anyway, I liked story. I liked Abigails voice a lot; it sounds very real and I can sympathise with her problems. I enjoyed looking at the world through her eyes.Author's Response: Hello!
First of all, sorry if the typos made the story difficult to read. Im afraid I miss a lot of them even when i double check the story for mistakes.
Anyway, thank you for reviewing! Im so glad that you liked the story-line. I really wanted Abby to be something else. It feels good knowing that I made her sound real and human.
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