Awww! That was soo sweet! The ending was so sad though ='(
10/10 =DAuthor's Response: Yes, it does have a sad ending. But there wasn't any other way to do it. Thanks for the review! Report Review
i loveed this storry it's good and very cutee :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Report Review
nice! very sweet, who is the guy again? made up character?Author's Response: Yeah, pretty much just a faceless jerk. For now. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Autorizacion! (that's Spanish for okay... according to this translator because I know all of like eight words in Spanish, so I had to cheat)
Oh, the ending's (and all the parts of what she did to the stuff) really sad. Good, but sad.
I liked the repitation of 'The summer I was' stuff, it really added to the passing of time and the relationship growing. Seroiusly though, what type of guy would ask a girl to marry him when he's cheating, that's so stupid...boys should grow out of stuff like that by twenty-three, right?
Really good story though, good job!Author's Response: Boys are jerks. It's just true sometimes. Thanks for the review! Report Review
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