i love this story its so sad . i love all your storys ... mine a re rubbish compeared o most on this website but i think a better song for this is my immortal by evanescene, i listen to it while reading. 10/10 . i mean it!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'll have to read some of yours, I'm sure they aren't rubbish. Anyone who can take a story and put it to words already has a gift, you may just need to work on it a bit. As for My Immortal, I'm working on writing a story to that. That is a good song! Thanks again!!

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wow very gripping story. i nearly cried it was so intense! very well done

Author's Response: Wow thanks!! It's an intense song so I hope I did it justice. Thanks for reviewing!!

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This is depressing! Sorry, that's just my opinion. Good job anyway!

Author's Response: Ha! It's okay! Your opinion is your opinion! Thanks!!

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That was great! But when it said he didn't wake up, does that mean he slipped back into the coma or was he just asleep? Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks. It meant he slipped back into the coma. I'm working on a prequel and a sequel for this one in the near future! Keep an eye out!

Thanks for the review!!

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A little confusing. I guess Hermione was dreaming that Harry was remembering. Kind of a sad story.

Author's Response: It was a flashback in the form of a dream. It actually happened. Sorry about the confusion. Yes, the sadness too. But it's one of my favorite songs so I had to write to it. Thanks for the review!!

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