Holiday Review Extravaganza Part 2
AHH! A Harry/Hermione story! And a good one too! I really liked how you showed Ron being wrong, which is something you don't see a lot in fanfiction. Also, I really liked how you incorperated Harry in there, as well. It was unique, so good job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! Not only for taking the time to review but also reading the story! I'm happy that you find this story different and that you actually liked it. Thanks!!

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Awww, screw it. HAHA! I'm not a Harry/Hermione shipper, but this was SO cute! If you were ever trying to make it better (this is a game I play a lot so bear with me) (20 seconds later) I would have a bit more tears and more boyfriend in it. Who was he? Who did he cheat on Hermione with? Where are they in their relationship? Still, I think it's fine the way it is. Your writing flowed beautifully, I only spotted one major typo, and I can be fairly picky about that, so great job! ~writergirl8

Author's Response: Well, I feel special that you read my story even though you don't support this pairing, thank you. As for the tears and boyfriend, well, I'm not sure. Things just kinda played out how they did. But yes, I probably should have put more detail. Thank you for the compliment and the review!

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I love this song lol good job! 10/10

Author's Response: Me too. Thanks!!

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great fic u have here. keep up the good work please.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you!!

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cool i am guessin ron was the ex?

Author's Response: no just a random guy. he's got no name.

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