5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by CoalBlackCat Halloween

7th April 2010:
Wow that was so beautiful. I nearly teared up reading that its just how I imagined their life would be before they had to die so young. Good job it was beautifully well written.

Author's Response: thank you I'm glad you liked it, I always felt a connection to Lily so I really wanted to do her justice in this story, i'm glad you liked it

 Report Review

Review #2, by Tabby Halloween

9th February 2009:
It's great Lily. And you were worried I would think it was bad.xD

Author's Response: Thank you,
I guess I am more critical when it's my own writing


 Report Review

Review #3, by luv2theWeasleys66 Halloween

3rd February 2009:
aaaw! i really liked this story!! great job!
i luv jacob black~~

Author's Response: me too, I'm a big NessieXJake fan, in another story i'm working on i wanted lupin to imprint on tonks, just because it would be funny.

 Report Review

Review #4, by j Halloween

3rd February 2009:
good work...but how did lily know tht peter had betrayed them??

Author's Response: Because, Lily, James, and Sirius knew that he was their secret keeper, even though nobody else did, so if Voldy got in then Peter the only one who could have betray them. Thanks for the reveiw, though, I'm glad you liked it.

 Report Review

Review #5, by ssssserpents Halloween

2nd February 2009:
really good! i usually dont like the one shots about the night they died but you did it really well!

Author's Response: Thank You, I tried really hard, and it terrible to get varifed, but I think it worked nicely

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login