Amazingly brilliant story no doubt this is talent of urs will one day be someones competition!!! :D

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Wow i am loving it! Careful she might explode!! :P

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Ok, it bothers the heck out of
Me that your story wouldn't be a thing like that would happen . Vampires skin is so hard that spells would just bounce off. And if they were struck. By the death spell, they wouldn't die, they're already dead. Also there way faster than your story makes it seem

Author's Response: Oh, sorry about that. But it's really just your opinion that they are not immune to any spell. The way I write it is that the Killing Curse wouldn't kill them it just hurts them. There really is no right answer as to if vampires would feel a spell, but that's just the way I write it.

Clair

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I love your story. It is to amazing for words.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it :D

Clair :D

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hehehehe a pizza loving vampire? LOL much!
heh. I like her special power :) very nice idea.
Just a few spelling/grammar points again:
'We do it real food,'
(I'm pretty sure it should be eat, right...?)
and:
Or that I maybe dreaded on things that had happened in the past
(Or that I maybe dreaded things that had happened in the past... - no on, yeah?)
Sorry if you don't but I thought you might appreciate it
Love Amberfire

Author's Response: Of course I appreciate it! I always need help with stuff like that. Still on the story I'm writing now I'm not very good at all that stoof but I've got a beta now (bless them :D) so hopefulyl I can learn and get better! ;D Thanks for the help! I'm surprised you found this story since it's kind of been finished for a while, making it go towards the back of the crossovers list ;)

Clair :D

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heh heh fuuunny
well it is good story and I like it but there are a few spelling errors I thought you might want to know about; you spelt dying as dieing twice, and writing was spelt as righting once. Just thought you might want to know, they are both in the first half of the chapter.
good work! I like it :)
Love Amberfire

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, that's kind of an old chapter so my writing/spelling was not too great ;) Thanks so much for reviewing!

Clair :D

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OMGOMGOMG!!! That was so so so good!!! I don't think I can comment on all the thing I loved, Cause it would take hours and I have to go to school! XD I'm so glad Derrick is ok and is 'dating' Evelyn! I so can't wait to read more of your stories! This one had a perfect ending! And i loved loved loved the way you started the chapter! It was so inspiring! Ok I think I need to stop now, or I'll miss my bus! XD I'll be waiting for more!
1000/.0001
~Aurora
P.S.- I think a When I Became a Cullen 2 would be epic!!!

Author's Response: SMILE, SMILE SMILE! :D THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm love that you loved it :D Oh, yeah darn school always takes away my time from my reviews :'( Don't they know how important a review is for people???!! Anyhoo, thank you SO much for reading my story and sticking with it. You have no CLUE how much it means to me :) You want more stories? I've got more stories! :D I'd really, really, really like it if you could take a look at One's Innocence maybe? It's a newie so I'm striving for feedback :D

And as for the sequel, trust me, I had so much planned but the next story to this was just not working the way I'd hope BUT! But I am doing one-shot sequals and to When I Became a Cullen (I've actually already written one ;) But thanks so much again! *crush hug*

Clair :D

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Thanks. You made me cry. HOW COULD YOU KILL AVERY?!? Anyway the chapter was great. It was funny how Alice knew Harry was ok. But what about Derrick!!? If you killed him I'm not reading your stories anymore. (well I will-they're too good-but I won't review! HA!) Now on to the next chapter!
100/10
~Aurora

Author's Response: Hehe. Did I really make you cry? I'm sorry :( But I'm glad my emotion was good then. :D Haha, well thank you SO much for the lovely review! They mean so much! :') Haha, well, please continue reading and reviewing cause' HE DOESN'T DIE!!! :D Haha, I don't think it wouldn't've been a good idea, A: because there'd be an angry mob after me :0 and B: I can't end it all for Evelyn that soon :) So, no worries! ;) Thanks again for the review! *hugs*

Clair :D

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AHH! This is soo good! Can't review must read more!
1000/10
~Aurora

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Happy reading :D

Clair :D

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WOOT! Harry! lol ok the chapter went by really fast, but somehow it worked really nicely! Idk how that works out, but good job! I would write more, but I want to keep reading Tata!
100/10
~Aurora

Author's Response: Haha! Thank you so much! You make me feel happy :D Thank you tonses for reading and reviewing! You have abolutely NO idea how happy it makes me :D

Clair :D

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Wow, it took me forever to review! lol ok moving on. I loved loved loved your chapter! I think its so cute how protective Derrick is over Evelyn and I'm really interested to see how their relation goes! I feel bad for her dad. Dieing sucks. lol anyway I moving on to the next chapter tata
10/10
~Aurora

Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, no worries about the forever review :D The point is you reviewed and I heavily thank you for sticking with the story after all this time

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why are they so mean to Remus? :(

Author's Response: Haha, he's a werewolf! They don't like werewolves. It is alright though. I love Remus and it hurt for them to do that, but it'll be ok. You'll see! Haha, thank you so much for reading!

Clair :D

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Wow, I was hoping somebody would write something like this. I love Twilight and Harry Potter so this was great!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much! I'm super happy you liked it! Thank you for reading!!

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Aww that was possibly the sweetest ending ever. *tears filling my eyes* hehe. i loved the scene between evelyn and derrick (like i like every scene between them) it was so innocent and cute with just the right touch of a romantic cheesy goodbye. i cant help but say aww again. i loved your story and im sad to see it come to an end. you did a really great job with it. totally pumped for your next story though!! WOOT!! lol. this was awesome. thank you for writing it!

Author's Response: Thank you for thanking me for writing it! That last little sentence in your review. thank you. it meant a lot. Thank you for helping me along the way! I don't know if you noticed but in my author's note you're one of the people I mentioned as a thank you. (sorry i forgot if i used your penname or not in it, but for sure you get credit for helping me!)

And even though Why I Waited (supposed to be sequel) won't make it up here (my own problem) I'd like to give you a HUGE thanks for hearing me out on my problems with that particular story. I'm still making one-shots with Evelyn and Derrick, but I thank you for listening and helping me through out that stupid writer's block. Thanks so much!

Clair :D

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omg!!! no its over :0
im gonna miss this story :(
this woz such an amazin story i luved it sooo much
are u going to do a seqal? it wud be so amazin if u did
10/10
natalie

Author's Response: Aaaaw thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! No, no sequal BUT I am writing some one-shots that further Evelyn and Derrick's relationship. One it already finished and there should be more to come, but I have another story that should be up soon and I hope I'll see you there with a review! Thank you so much for your great reviews for I believe every chapter of this story. Thank you thank you thank you!

Clair :D

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D'aww i cannot believe it's over!
I seriously hope you put up a new story soon!
Welldone tbh!
Estella x

Author's Response: Thank you Estella! I'm so glad you like it! It's the first novel I've ever finished and may I say I'm quite glad to have a finished story under my belt. I've already begun my new story and I hope I'll see another review from you! Thanks again!

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Cool cool cool I love it don't mind me I'm a bit loopy today onwards I hope you make more stories like this one I'm sad that it has finished but then I have enjoyed reading you're story well I have a new story called Hell is a reality for some hope you like it now I need some help with my 5th chapter of Harry potter and Co vs the Cullen's since my pen drive has broke it was on it with other story's I was going to post up so will you help me with it and could you pretty please help with Hell is a reality for some chap 2 I don't mind if you don't agree but it is worth a shot I hope you have a good summer holiday's this year Clair.
Rating 10/10
Bye
~Emma~

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sure, I'll help as much as I can with your story! Perhaps you could sign up in the HPFF forums and send me an Owl? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story! You rock!

Clair :D

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*Claps wildly* Yay!! I love it! It was a great story! The end chapter was perfect. It summed everything up without being too quick. Maybe you could write a sequal! It could be about the weddings or something. That would be so cool! I had a great time reading the story, and I can't wait to see what else you write! Great work!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you SO very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! I actually was going to write a sequal but I just had WAAAY too many problems with it, btu you will seee some one-shots with Evelyn and Derrick. I've actually already written one, so once I get a few chapters up from my new story (I DESPERATELY hope you'll read it!!!) the one-shot shall be posted! Thank you a thousand times for staying with the story through and through and I wildly hope to see you in another review soon! Thank you!

Clair :D

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It says thei mage has been deleted. bt great story

Author's Response: Thanks! I don\\\'t know why it\\\'s saying that though...

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WOW! LOVED IT! It was so good. My eyes were glued to my laptop the whole time DYING to know what was going to happen next! I hate to see the Fred still dies along with Avery (That was so sad by the way, I actually teared up a bit. I'm not even lying girl.) I was happy to see that Bella was still alright. I completely forgot about the Room of Requiement burning up until I started reading about it and I was like 'Oh my goodness! Bella! Run!' lol.

I think it's awesome that they cannot die from the Killing Curse. So sweet of Eveyln to save Ginny. Did she know that she couldn't die from the curse or was she just guessing? Either way it was a very nice thing to do for her friend.

This is totally my favorite chapter in this story. Yes, it was long enough. lol. Ah, it was so good! Cannot wait for the next chapter even though I know the story is coming to an end. =[

Good, awesome, amazing job! =] 10/10! You so deserve it!

PS. I thought it was cool when Alice was all like 'He's just faking it' when Harry comes out and everyone thinks he's dead. lol. Loved that part for some reason, it pretty much rocked my socks. Kay! I've rambled enough. Bye!

Author's Response: Ah! Thank you! You made me smile! I'm really so sad right now cuz I just came back from the BEST WEEK OF MY LIFE at camp! Yeah, but wow! You teared up! I mean, I didn't mean to make you almost cry, but it's cool to see that it got to you like that and that you capture the emotion! Thank SO much for reading and reviewing! Fo sho! (haha it mean for sure I learned it from camp)

Clair :D

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Aw. Avery! Waa! Fred! It hurts the second time too!! Haha update soon. 10/10

Author's Response: Yeah, it was really sad to write them dying. But thank you SO much for reviewing!

Clair :D

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wow this is an amazin chapter x]
just one thing tho hu is avery?? and y woz she upsett about her diein i gt confused at tht bit lol
but it woz a relli gd chapter x
cnt wait for the next one
natalie x

Author's Response: Avery was one of Evelyn's friends, but she was actually mentioned in the story a few times just not much. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Clair :D

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that was awsome and might I say... FINALLY! Jeeze I was staring to wonder if you were ever gonna let them kiss! heehee. Can't wait until the next one. 10/10

Author's Response: Aaaw, thanks! You made me smile! :D Yeah, I thought it'd be a pretty good time for them to kiss. Thanks for the fabulous 10/10! And for reading and reviewing. Thank you!

Clair :D

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aww the derrick/evelyn moment was so sweet. i couldnt help but smile while reading it. im so excited to see the battle. vampire on vampire. should be amazing! i love how you have the brothers trying to comfort their little 'sister' thats very cute too. overall amazing chapter i loved it! update soon! =]

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Clair:D

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Oooh! Love it:) absouloutely fabulous :)
10/10

Author's Response: Sveet! Thanks for the 10/10! I really appreciate you reading and reviewing. Thank you!

Clair :D

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