LOVED IT! I was so on edge because, like i said, i thought this chapter would have something about how they died. You didn't make me burst into tears and weep bitterly! Like i also said, LOVE IT! Cant wait to read the sequel!
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Okay, i love all of this story so much so far but i have one thing to say- my only thought so far about the next chapter is that it better not be about how they die. I dont want to end up crying right now! Please, i dont wanna die again in my head! Halarious, btw . . .
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What year are they in? U said something in an earlier chapter about NEWTs and now you mentioning OWLs???
Btw, great story so far! Report Review
That Sirius-jumping-on-bed -scene is hilarious! I love it! xD
I've written too a few stories, dunno if they are good or not, but go check them out if you like! :D All Marauders, anyway. xD Report Review
I like your writing a lot, it's really good!
I'm not really sure what to think of this chapter, for the most part it's really really good, but I think Lily is a bit out of character (from the way I imagine her, at least)
First, I think she would have figured Remus out by herself, not from James telling her
Second, I don't think she would ever give away Remus' secret, it wasn't her secret to tell and she wouldn't do that even though her friends were bugging her
Just my opinion - don't take it the wrong way, I absolutely adore your story! Just felt like voicing my opinion! Report Review
Okay i cant take it anymore. Pleaz...Pleaz...Pleaz just put James and Lily back together. Other than that i love the story. I really do. Awesome plot and everything. Report Review
I like it...no love it. It is a great story. Question: are Lily and James going to get back together soon. They are my fav couple and to see them apart almost makes me want to stop reading...relax i said almost...i am definaltley not going to stop reading this story. it's too great. I really hope you put them back together soon. Question 2: are the rest of the marauders going to get back with their partners. i hope so. okay i am a little bit of romatic freak but hey i like the romance as much as the action and i havent really seen much action so i look at the romance. I love the story and ask that you definatly keep writing and updating. Report Review
this is a great story and i really love it. you have done such a great job with this story. i have a favor to ask, i am writing a story called, 'Surprises! Will it make or break a bond?' and i was wondering if you would please r/r. it isnt finished, but i need some ideas and stuff like that. it's my first story and i need some back up. you seem like a good writer and someone who would give me the truth. great story and keep writing. please r/r my story. thanx Report Review
i like this story. I dont remember if i reviewed but i really do love this story. I like how you put Emma in there for James to have to stay and prove he is true to Lily. Question: Will James ever confront Lily about 'letting it slip about it being a animagus'? Let me kno Report Review
WOW! I'm speechless! This chapter was great! This WHOLE story was SUPER GREAT! Report Review
oh i wish theyd get back together!! :P
excellent excellent excellent storie bytheway!!
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in the first one you said Lily was in her seventh year, but here it says fifth. It's kinda confusing. Report Review
ohhh that was tooo cutee!
i lovee it!
finally! her friends are jerks! Report Review
im actually crying!
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omg omg omg omg omg ! i totally ah-dore this! its so romantic and sweet and cute!
awww too cutee!! i heart this!! Report Review
oh pooorr Lily!! i knew something would happen. :((( Report Review
the whole 5thyear-7thyear thing is screwed, but its still 2 cutee!! Report Review
wait how can Lily be head girl and be in 5th year! Report Review
me encanta~ Report Review
This is a confusing story. I wish more people would take the time to actually make them fall in love rather than just say it. You keep saying 5th year and OWLS, but they're supposed to be 7th with NEWTS. Report Review
This is really good ! One of the best Lily and James stories I've read. My story isn't very good, its only got one chapter but the second one is waiting but I personally don't like the second one, but I do like the third one, only half done but still, please R/R. And I LOVE it how Sirius and Erica react differently ;-) Report Review
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