Haha! That was funny:) I liked how you just had dialog, and didn't go into detail. It kinda grosses me out when people write sex scenes on here... So thank you for not doing that!

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This is quite sweet... I couldn't help but smile :)
I don't know if I like or don't like the fact that it's only dialogue.
But sweet.
xx

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Oooh, smutty! Totally like it! :D

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Wow *blushes* Fred is so damn cheeky!

Author's Response: Dear Becca,
I agree... :)
It was just a silly one-shot... I think my other stories are better...
Thanx for reading and reviewing!
Hugs xxx


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Oh that was really cute and funny. I loved it! Great job! Very nice idea. 10/10 ~Jen

Author's Response: Dear Jen,
I'm glad you liked this piece of fun :)
Thanx for the nice words and the great rating! :)
Hugs xxx

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LOL! I WILL DIE IF YOU DO NOT WRITE A SEQUEL!

Author's Response: Sorry, I'm not planning to write a sequel :(
Thanx for reading and reviewing!
Hugs xxx

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loved it (again) haha :DD

Author's Response: Then it was worth writing it :)
Thanx for reading and reviewing!
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Awww, cute :)
it made me really made me laugh, what a good one shot :D
xo

Author's Response: Thanx for the lovely review,
glad you liked it:)
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Hahahaha, okay that was hilarious. A little bit weird and unrealistic, I mean, who talks like that? But hilarious all the same.

Author's Response: Thanx for the kind words :)
Yeah, it is weird and unrealistic, it was meant to be :)
Hugs xxx

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that was the funniest thing ever! i love it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :)
Thanx for the nice review!
Hugs xxx

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lol! awesome! just wow! :) nice ending.

Author's Response: Dear Joy,
Thanx for the kind review :)
I'm glad you liked this crazy piece of writing...
Hugs xxx

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Good idea, but I can tell you liked writing the love potion better.

Author's Response: Dear Seacoastmuggle,
I enjoyed writing all my stories but this one was the craziest and silliest one, I think. The story of the love potion is a bit more serious.
Thanx for the nice review :)
Hugs xxx

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Hahahahahahaa omg this was hilarious. It really was hilarious. I loved it, haha, you're a legend ;P

Author's Response: Dear sirius hotter,
thank You so much for the wonderful words :) You are very kind. I'm glad I could make you smile :)
Hugs xxx

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I cant express how funny this story is. Seriously, it gets funnier everytime I read it, and i think I am going to add it to my favorites so I can read it whenever I want to!

The way you portrayed Fred seems really like how he could be in canon, and Hermione gets a littel OOC at the end, but honestly, its better for the story that way.

Geez, nice timing Malfoy! Way to ruin a moment! Wonder what would have happened if he hadnt come along...well, maybe I know ^_^

Anyways, I love this story, as always! Good job!
~~Chelsea

Author's Response: Dear Chelsea,
your review made my day :)
I really appreciate you enjoyed this crazy piece of writing :)
Hugs xxx

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went too fast with the tender yet passionate stuff. loved the broomstick ending

Author's Response: Yeah, I know, it is a short piece of writing that is why it went too fast... I'm happy you enjoyed the ending :)
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Well that was funny, I love it. Try describing what they're doing so the reader has something to read although we could picture it in our heads. ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thanx for the nice review :)
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this was the funniest most amazing story of my life!

Author's Response: Thanx for the flattering review, you made my day!:)
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Haha, that is funny! kudos!

Author's Response: Dear Ally,
glad you found it funny, yes, it's a kind of parody, not to be taken seriously... A silly piece of writing... :)
Hugs xxx

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This was so funny i really enjoyed this

Author's Response: Yes, it was intended to be just a funny piece of fluff not to be taken seriously...
Im happy you enjoyed it:)
Hugs xxx

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Awe, i like the fred and Hermione stories... It's a great story.

Author's Response: Dear Natalie,
Thanx for the nice review:)
It was meant to be a silly, funny dialogue, but I am glad you liked it :)
Hugs xxx

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i read on one of your replies to one of your reviews that english is your second language.
you speak english alot better than alot of people i know and i live in australia. LOL.
not saying we're stupid or anything, its just some people have a very crappy understanding of english.
i LOVE hermione/fredorgeorge and i love your story.

wish i was hermione
:)

Author's Response: Dear eliseelove,
Nice to hear from you again :)
Your sweet review and the kind words mean a lot to me, especially because, as you have read it, English is only my second language, I learnt it at school. Maybe that's why I try to concentrate more on grammar and spelling than someone whose mother tongue is English. Unfortunately my vocabulary is not as rich as I would like it to be...
So I take it as a special compliment if someone whose first language is English likes my stories :)
Actually, I have seen your photo on your author's page, and I'm sure you will find your fredorgeorge soon :))
Hugs xxx

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oh deary me
this is um terrifying!

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Great story, I just never imagened Hermione with Fred.

Author's Response: Yes, this ship can seem weird at first.
I'm glad you liked it :)
Thanx for the review!
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xD
That was good. A little too fast for me, but very good.

Author's Response: I agree with you, it was a bit too fast... It was my second one-shot, I think now I would write it differently...
I always appreciate your feedback, and grateful for your kind words!
hugs xxx

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haha...I would of told to you to write a bit more detail so that the reader could get a better picture of their movements and thoughts but its nice the way it is.just with the two of them talking, its different.
I was never a person for Hermione/Fred fics, but this story was sooo darn sweet.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked my story in spite of the fact that you are not a Fremione fan :)
I wanted to try this 'just-dialogue' style, it is a bit special. This way the readers can use their imagination about the thoughts and movements of the characters.
Thanx a bunch for reading and reviewing!:)

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