I think it's kind of unusual that most of the things james loves about Lily is when shes falling over or tripping over or stumbling about. That's the only thing, I think you over used that one a bit so it sounds a bit... weird. Other than that was very cute. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Haha. I hadn't actually thought about that, but when reading through the story, I can see that. 3/10 is a lot. Thanks for the review!

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Great story- I loved the idea and the style, as well as the meaning behind it! However, I felt the grammar was just slightly off on some bits and pieces. Overall, it was bloody brilliant, though!

xo MBTN xo

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it, even though my grammar is far from perfect (explanation: I'm not English). Thanks for your kind words!

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This was excellent! I love how all the things James told her were kind of more minor things that a normal person wouldn't know, just proving to her how much he really loved her.
Sweet story! I loved it. :)

Author's Response: Which is exactly the point. Really, I think love is about all those small things we get to love about each other (plus that special feeling of course). Thanks for the review!

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I loved this, it's funny and romantic! Haven't read anything better, save for the actual Harry Potter series.

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you very much! :)

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Aww! That is so adorable! c:
Sque!

Author's Response: Thank you - that was the point with the story! :)

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Awesome!
This story was really funny.
I like it!
:)

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You made me laugh... Great idea!

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“You do realize that James’s a Marauder and even if you don’t show your face today, he’ll find a way to tell you nonetheless, right?” *I like that. Not sure why, but it's great.*
“Okay then. Am I free to go now?” “Not if I was to decide, but I’m not, so just go.” *That one's nice too. Makes me want to laugh, and it makes me like James even more. I think he's great btw.*
How he did it I had no idea, but he did have class. *So true, lol.*
James had a thing for last names, I think. *Great line. Made my smile.*
“You like people for their good sides, but love them for their flaws.” *That's a great thing for James to say, it's sweet and smart. Brilliant.*
“Fantastic.” *I have to agree. I think it's a brilliant James/Lily story. And Christine is really great. I like the Marauders feel you get sometimes too. I think this time at Hogwarts is great, but that's probably because I just really like the Marauders. So... Fantastic.*

Author's Response: Haha. I like all those quotes you've picked too, especially the one with loving people for their flaws - that's what this whole story is about.
And I really like the Marauders too, so I wanted to have them included as much as possible, not just James! Thanks very much for the review.

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Ahhh so cute! I love the ending! Actually, I love the whole thing, with James being all perfect and charming and always catching Lily by surprise, but then she finally catches him by surprise... very cute, and totally perfect! Love it! 10/10!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks you. Well in my head James is perfect and charming, so yes for you also thinking so!
Thanks for the review!

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Oh my! I love this(: I have been having a very bad week, and this just brightened my day...considerably!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad it could! Thanks for the review!

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another chapter it is awsome

Author's Response: Sorry, it's only written as a one-shot, though I have played ith the idea of making a sequel :P Thanks!

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i love it! the best that i've read so far! :D james was just PERFECT.

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That was sweet!!! I love it!!

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that's really funy,cute and beutiful!

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I want my own James. But I think you probably already heard this from other reviewers. The way you portrayed James and his love for Lily is really unique but still James Potter. You get what I mean? My favourite point was:

“Okay. I love that you can’t wear white clothes at dinner without spilling on it. All right?”

All the points were wonderfull .But this one I really loved. I also want a boy who loves me for my flaws! I’m also not a Lily/James lover. I don’t like to read about the paring at all ( as main pairing) But I reallyl oved your story. I’m going to add this in my favourite list.

-xoxox-

Cleopatraa

Author's Response: I think everyone wants their own Jamens - me too! I get it yeah, and that one especially is one of my favourites too :P
Thanks very much, and I'm glad you liked it even though you're not much of a L/J shipper ;D

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I really hope who ever the heck you are that wrote this story can type fast other wise you are gonna have a seriosly angry girl on your hands! So whip out the next couple of chapters would ya! I cant wait to read more I love it :) An ddont take offense if any of this sounded harsh I was just trying to det my point across that I want you to finish writing! :)

Author's Response: Haha. Oh, I'm sorry, but it ends there. It's all there is. I was thinking about writing a second part, but I don't know how to make it work. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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that was awesome. very great.

definitely giving you 10/10

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i love this story!
i've read it so many times!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks very much! It's good to know it's worth a second or third read! :D

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Wonderful last chapter.
I would be really happy if you wrote the date.
Maybe with Sirius there to screw it up.
*Smiles hopefully*
:)
Peace out.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. Haha. I had thought about that. Thanks for the review!

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This is so cute! I love it! absolutely 100 perent love it!

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Haha! Funny and absolutely adorable!!! Wonderful job!

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LOL that is hilarious!

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wow.. i love this one..!! =]

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awww i want a guy to notice all my flaws like that. i think every girl deserves a james just how you made him. absolutely lovely :)

Author's Response: Yeah, we do :P Haha. But unfortunately only the fewest are that sweet. Thanks for the review!

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that was so amazing. though now you've killed it for my boyfriend because he could never be that cute :) i normally don't like short things like this but that was great.

Author's Response: Yeah, I've heard that once before. But I'm sure he thinks so even though he does not say :D Thanks for the review!

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