awesome story. please continue. Report Review
Really good story! Hope you continue writing this :) Report Review
I really like this story. The idea and the way you wirte it.
I really, really hope that you didn't abandon this story and that you'll update it soon. Report Review
this is a great story...I'm looking forward to read te end, plese update! Report Review
So. How about I think this story is pretty awesome? I wish you would write the rest of it! Of course, it would be my rotten luck that you've dropped the project or don't even visit this site anymore. :( Anyway, I'm anxious to hear the rest of your story. Even if you don't write anymore, please check out my ramblings of a story. Just search me, ShadowChanger. Report Review
Please write more!!! Report Review
I like it!! All her nieces and nephews are there with her now.lolz, that's cute.Author's Response: It was too good of an opportunity to resist- I have lots of cousins and i know it would definitely not be on my priority list to be both their idol and go to the same school! Report Review
ooo this story is getting good keep it comingAuthor's Response: Glad you like, my internet is kind of wacky since we have wireless and it's not hardwired into my computer but I try to keep it updated as quickly as possible :^) Report Review
aww man... now i have to wait for the next chapter?
hey...? do you recon you can make the next chapter... longer?
longer chapters are always better. (^_^)
also, you made a mistake last chapter:
when Maria asked to borrow the HM notes, you've got written down '"Yeah, I guess so," Hermione said, still staring at Hermione.'
~DisabledLlamaAuthor's Response: You'd think, that having read through this story bazillion times I would have caught that. Thanks for pointing it out, though. Report Review
oooh goody goody goody!
someone with a dark past, fidgety habits... *swoon* I love dark characters. (^_^)
~DisabledLlama Report Review
Oh noo ! Why'd it have to end theree !
I so want to read the rest now :( Lol
goood storyy so far (:
xxAuthor's Response: HAHA! Cliffhanger! I'll update soon, don't worry. :^) Report Review
This is my first time on this site. I'm so glad that I picked your story to read first. I'll be eagerly looking for updates. I hope you are a quick updater. I will be looking forward to hearing what horrible things have happened to Maria in her life.Author's Response: I think Maria should be offended! *laughing* Okay, well, glad you enjoy! Report Review
Love the update. Again, I like the ending bit. I dunno why, but your endings are always really good. Keep up the awaesome work! Report Review
LOL. she has a stalker. dating guys shorter than her. I wish I was tall enough to have that problem. I have to go on tip toe to reach over tall counters! I liked the last conversation between Snape and Maria, it has a nice atmophere.
keep up the good work! Report Review
hehe. goth clothes. love Maria; you've illustrated her nicely. can't wait to read more! & love the music bit tooAuthor's Response: Unfortunately, the goth clothes won't come in until way later. And I had to give Maria a musical side. Report Review
Hehe. Good start on what looks to be a promising story! I love the heels! God, I wish I was tall! I Wanna be tall! Anyways, love your OC, she's got and awesome personality (wearing an American flag and all.) Can't wait to see what you write up next!!Author's Response: Maria is seriously one of my favorite characters of all time. I have rewritten this story I don't know how many times to get it right, and I just HAD to make her tall, 'cause my family's genes have made me short, so she's like the epitome of the body I wish I had. Report Review
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