Ooh I like it ;]
You write really well!
Update soon xx Report Review
Another fantastic chapter! Dom is one of my favorite Next Gen. characters and I love that the story is centered around her. So far, I love her and Thomas relationship and I would love to see more of that. But I think she could do with some more flaws, because even to she is a bit of a bitch - or at least that's the vibe I'm getting - she seems pretty perfect. Usually I feel it's easier to connect with the character if they have some obvious flaw like they're uncertain about something with their look or that they're not very good at something etc. etc. That's just me thoug. So, great job! I loved the part about Roxanne stealing her owls, hah. Report Review
Bloody Amazing start. I like your writing style, and the way you've mad all of the three girls really different.
I love that she's in Slytherin and the way she introduces herself:
"I'm not all Weasley." Dominique retorted. "I'm Dominique." she introduced herself with a smile.
That sentence as brilliant.Author's Response: Bloody Amazing? Really? Wow, thanks! I'm so glad you liked it and that you enjoyed the bit with Thomas. Report Review
You're more than welcome for the inspiration. I'm glad you liked it. And I'm thrilled to see it finally posted here.
As I said before, I found it fantastic. I love that Dominique is not in Gryffindor, and that she is totally okay with it.
I'm really looking forward to reading more.Author's Response: Once again, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I was worried I wouldn't be able to do it justice. I'm almost done with chapter 2, so be expecting it relatively soon. Report Review
That was pretty good, I hope that you are able to update soon. This should prove interesting for all of the Weasleys'.Author's Response: I am almost done with the second chapter of this story, so hopefully you won't have too long of a wait. Thanks for the review. Report Review
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