Random but very cute!!

Author's Response: Haha, I'm very random so what can I say, I knew it'd seep in somewhere! Thanks, glad you liked it :) Jessiy x

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Great story and great ending!
Its lovely to read short, lighthearted stories every now and then!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I kinda have a soft spot for this one myself, it was my first on here. Thank you for the review, sorry my reply is late and I hope to repay the favour soon Jessiy x

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Nope won't use it, didn't fit
Thanks

Author's Response: Thats fine hun x

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Very enjoyable.
I had to keep my focus on the words I was reading and not let them drift to the bottom of the page.
I could feel the excitement.
I would like to steal a bit of your story to include in one of my own. I hope you don't mind.
I will read more of your stuff later. You've given me a story line I was stuck on. Thanks GH.

Author's Response: Hey, glad you liked it! I'm not sure about the use pof my work in your own so if we could talk about it over email or msn I will then agree so PLEASE get back to me before using my work, e-mail me at jessiy_in_love(at)hotmail.(co).(uk). So for now please dont use my work lol :) Jessiy...x

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Whoa, good description! I could vividly see the whol event playing in my head. Have you ever had any real books published?If not, you need to work on a novel, you'd be a great author!! Love the stories:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hehe! Nope, no books released I'm 17 and to busy with college but I am trying to write a novel :D Again, thank you so much! Jessiy x

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Oh, I like this A LOT! The ending is brilliant and the way the tension built up made it all the better.

You complain about your grammar but it's not too bad. Could definatly be worse.

Only little critisism is prehaps to vary your paragraph size a little bit more. I know it sounds silly but people have told me to do just that and it does make your writting better.

Honeycomb. [x]

PS. Thank you for the compliment on my name. Yours is lovely too.

Author's Response: Cheers, i think I get you about varying chapter size. some big and some small?

In other work, such as 'Forbidden Lovers' and work I'm writing on (which will be here but not for a while) I find I have done it alot more.

Much thanks, any complaints/ critisism is gr8 and helps me! Much love and take care, Jessiy x

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As you were so good as to review a story of mine I thought I would review one of yours.

That was a really good attempt at a first story with nice descriptions and you handled the suspense really well.

loved the ending!! lol

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

I feel so priveledged (probs spelt wrong) because i love your work!

Thank you so much,
Jessiy x

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i think u should just prepare my funeral because u killed me at the last part. hehe
when are u updating ur other story?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Jus got to rewrite chap 3, wait for it to come up then the rest will be up hehe. cheers, glad u like it, jessiy x

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whoa, that was a good description, and quite the surprise ending! my heart was beating as i read the part where harry was running! it was really, really good. 11/10 :)

Author's Response: Firstly, thank you for being my first ever reviewer!
Thank you so much, I'm made up you liked it so much :)
Check out my other works when they're here! (one starting to be validated and is sure to be a shocker!)
Can't say how grateful I am, thank you
Jessiy x

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