looveedd itt! wee!!! Report Review
I KNEW IT! IT WAS HIS GOOD-FOR-NOTHING-FRICKEN PARENTALLS!!
AHHRRGGHH Report Review
SIRIUS IS INNOCENT GOSHDARNET
ITS PROBABLY HIS GOODFORNOTHING PARENTS AHHAHHAHH GRR Report Review
ITS THE END OF THE STORY! i loved the ending! and laughed a lot at the 'Best Couple Award' part :) fantastic work!Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you liked it. I thought the story could use a bit of humor so i added that... and i thought it was cute :) Report Review
i love this chapter, it is so. HAPPY!!! lol. pls update soon!Author's Response: I'm so happy you loved it. I will update really soon!! Report Review
"I would prefer you not to threaten my gargoyles."
hahahaha, that is my favorite line so far from this FanFic. That is awsome! I love this chapter, the fight scene was awsome, and I love how Severus helped her. And, the best part: she getts to stay at Hogwarts! I can't wait to see what happens next!Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!! Report Review
Aww, what a cute chapter. Does this mean its the end? Please no! This is such a good story!Author's Response: Its almost the end. I think the next chapter is the end. Actually, I'm pretty sure it is. I'm glad you like it! Report Review
this story is so freaking cool! plsplspls update soon! i can't wait to see what will happen to sirius, jade.!Author's Response: im so glad you like it! i will update super soon
Yayy! She's escaped! -does happy dance-
AMAZING CHAPTER! I loved it. =D Update soon! =]]]Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! And will update really soon! Report Review
story is to fast paced. imo spend more time developing the characters. also, try and be more original.Author's Response: okay, thanks for the tips. I've already written this story but in if i write another one I'll keep it in mind Report Review
"We aren't the good guys... we're the bad guys."
I LOVE IT! Cliches are cliches for a reason. I feel so bad for her though, she had no idea that she was working as a criminal. Update soon?Author's Response: I'm glad you like my dramatic cliche. I was tempted to make her let out a huge gasp and be like a damsel in distress but decided against it. lol.
Yeah, she has no clue she was working for criminals. and I will update soon Report Review
gee, UPDATE SOON is my response.Author's Response: Thanks! I will Report Review
Oh no! Poor Sirius! Why do they want Sirius? Why was Mr. Davis lying? Please update, I'm dying in suspence here. =]Author's Response: You'll see! Actually I'm really scared that the answer will be disappointing. Report Review
omg. very cuttteee! so is mr davis really working for voldermort or something? i cant belive she left sirius there!! update!!!Author's Response: Thank you!
And I wish i could answer your question! but you'll see really soon! Report Review
Ha!!! she beat them up so easily!!!
But now she is delivering Sirius so soon!!??
I mean, she has only been there for. a month!
Well, I guess a lot of excitement can happen in a month when she's with the marurders!
But what happened to the bitch of the school Anna???
She sorta just. disappeared.
I'd think she'd still want to get revenge on Jade! I mean, Jade
sorta challenged her, and i dont think a girl like her would give up so easily!
Also, Peter. he is missing!!!
I know he isn't the most liked character, but he is still important.
Even if he isn't in most of the story, he does need to be mentioned!! He ALWAYS tagged along with the marurders, they were like his only friends!
Still, the story is interesting, and AMAZING! Nothing can really change that!
So I look forward to the next Chap! Update ASAP!
10/10!Author's Response: shes just reminding him that she can turn him in... kind of like to show him how good she is at what she does... you know what i mean?
anna is not here anymore. she doesn't want revenge on Jade because in anna's mind, what jade told her was true because the marauders "advoided" her after she dressed all pretty.
die peter... die. i find it so hard to add him into my stories. i really do.
thanks for the review! Report Review
She ooowns!! Man I wish I could take down five guys. Haha at the end though. Maybe 10 may be too many even for an awesome spy giirl;) But haha at the beginning! They're floating over the lake.. ladidaa.. haha that's a pretty cool spell though, smart smart!
Waheey for Lily and James! Yup James matured aall by himself riight? But aw I want to see some more Lily/James action soon! (hint hint) It would be really cute if you could work that into the story a bit! :)
And Poor Sirius.. I bet Sirius didn't do anything wrong, I bet he's totally innocent or his family did something.. or maybe it's to do with Regulus? And ahhh please don't hurt him! Or their relationship.. :/ Well if it does please make sure it all works out ok! :)
Thanks for the update and please add another chappie soon, I'm looking forward to it!! 10/10 btw! x x xAuthor's Response: I KNOW! i wish i could just whip out a wand and scream and impressive sounding spell and they would all be on their backs. or i could use some mad karate moves and flips to scare them away... ive always dreamed about doing that. lol, but you have to admit that would be awesome.
i will try to add more lily and james whenever i can. and james did mature... with a little help. I don't want to say anything about the sirius thing because i dont want to ruin anything.
thanks for such a nice and long review!! Report Review
this story is awesome write more please pretty please?Author's Response: i will! thanks for the review! Report Review
im so sorry! i accidentally read the fourth chapter, and skipped this one!
gah, anna IS a be-och!Author's Response: thats okay :)
i know.. anna is evil! Report Review
ha ha! james, sirius, and snape will be there for the rest of their lives! awesome, awesome chapter, and i hope the mission soon is revealed!Author's Response: so what you know about the mission, is what she knows about the mission... basically nothing but to get sirius blacks trust then give him to the agency
thanks for the review!! Report Review
Hahahha yeees! She's soo good =) I feel so sorry for Snape.. I used to hate him until he explained everything before he died.. I LOVE him now! Haha but I'm JEALOUS! I want to be held in Sirius's arms.. :3 She has goood tactics man, she's a smartieee hehe great chapter though!! Please update soon! xx x xAuthor's Response: i always thought snape was good, but he just tried to be good in a bad way. (like always being mean to harry)
I KNOW! siriu sounds like such a hottie in all the stories... in the sirius/oc stories i always get jealous... lol Report Review
aw, poor Jade
She must have gone through something bad in order to feel that strong about what they were doing to Snape.
And btw, wouldn't Jade be Sirius's 5th best friend???
Don't forget Peter!!!
can't wait for the next!1Author's Response: i included peter... i think your thinking about the four marauders, but this is sirius and he cant be bffs with himself...
nothing happened to her, she just had always been taught to do good to others and when she saw this she got mad.
thats for the reivew! Report Review
Bahahah she's soo cool! I wish I could figure out what people were thinking like that omg.
But ugh Anna is SUCH a bitch!! Actually every Anna I know is a bitch. Isn't that creepy? I know two, and one is a total stuck up whore and the other one bitches about everyone. See? Anna=bitch! Haha so if I have a bitch kid I'll rename it Anna.. Haha jkjk =)
But ugh I hate her so much already. I'm practically radiating heat!! Hahah but I thiink Jade is starting to like Sirius already :3 Aw I hope she ditches her mission to be with him or something like that, that'd be adorable. I really hope nothing bad happens to him!
But ew and omg at how James would completely drop everything he was trying with Lily just because Anna looked hot? He's such a guy. I hate it. Hahhah but please update sooon I want to see what happens! Quick quick quick!! Hehe 10/10 x x xAuthor's Response: Haha, actually I know... 3 Anna's and all of them are nice, so I don't know why I put that as her name, but it just seemed to fit.
i know! James is such a guy! and so is Sirius. *sigh* but what can you do about them?
thanks for the long review! I love them! Report Review
Hahaha you have no idea :P It's not like she's planning to kill someone huh?? Haha but aw noo I don't want Sirius to get hurt, I love him! Ahh I'm all excited now!! But aw please don't hurt Sirius.. I want her to fall for him!! But lollage at how she beat them all at arm wrestling and how she's like the good girl but she's actually reaally not :P Aw she's so nice to Peter. They're so mean to him :( But I don't know. I guess they're too full of themselves. And oooh I hope she was right about how to get Lily to fall for James! Hahah oh well next chapter here I come!! 10/10Author's Response: right now, she doesn't know what shes going to do with Sirius. all she knows is that shes suppose to get close enough to him for him to trust her then turn him over to the company. i dont want to give anything so i wont say anything more, but thats the basic jist.
So I really dont like peter that much and although i would imagine that the marauders are super nice to him... i dont want it to be that way so it dont write it that way... its porbably not the best thing to do but whatever.
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Hahahahha you're gonna have to try harder with me! She's KILLER =)=) Wait have you ever seen John Tucker Must Die? This is like that movie! And that's my FAVOURITE movie!! Hehe so this is gonna be god. And I love the spy/Hogwarts twist, it's really interestiing.
She's such a good liar though, the whole 'old fashioned' thing and the 'try harder with me' (WHICH WAS AMAZING) ahh I just love it!! 10/10 and I can't wait for Ch 2!! x x xAuthor's Response: omg! i LOVE John Tucker Must Die! i love it! its hilarious! it kills me every time when he scales the building in the thong and then goes on the teachers bed. LMAO!
Thank you for the review! im glad you like it :) Report Review
Sorry about no reviewing the last chap. but I was sorta busy
It was amazing, like all of the other chaps.
OOOH! I bet Jade is going to make Sirius jealous by dressing up for some other guy.
Maybe. Diggory, Sirius's practicly worst enemy.
I have some feeling there will be a little rivalry between Jade and Anna...
Nice choice of the name Anna, for me I always imagine a bitch when I think of the name Anna
Probably because of this girl I knew.
cant wait for you to update!
I love stories with plots like this. Unusual, but work with J.K rowlings plot.
a 10/10 of course!Author's Response: LMFAO! i didn't think about the name Anna. anna isn't really big in my story but i agree... i always think of a really nasty, temperamental bitch when I think of the name anna.. (haha.. you know you love me)
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