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Review #1, by Pretty Purple Pelican The Snowball Fight

13th January 2009:
Haha! That was very cute. Nice job! The only part that I thought was unnecessary was when you stated that Poppy and Minerva were his best friends. I think you could've left the story to tell us that, and it was just a little distracting. It was a really cute, random idea, but I really enjoyed it! Nice job! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'm glad you liked my little story!

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