Reading Reviews for To Melt a Heart
  
133 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Rose Wilde The Break-up

7th March 2011:
more absolutley love it make them kiss qlease

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Review #2, by LoveDraco_411 The Break-up

16th July 2010:
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and the kiss!! Love the plot

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Review #3, by Barette Small Changes

16th July 2010:
Heyy i just started reading your story today and i really love it! Love the Dramione relationship in this chapter too (: Can't wait to read more!

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Review #4, by Blue Biro The Break-up

27th June 2010:
maybe kissing in the next chapter you say!?!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! i really have no patience, i cantw ait (literaly) for more!
pleasepleasepleas3 (insert please times 38) update soon!
loved the chapter!
as per usual, you are ana amzing author and i love your work!
you rock!
becky :) x
more please!
;p
7802316489627386786238767326471278647328478324 / 10!
UPDATE PLEASE!

Author's Response: Maybe kissing. thanks so much. You have totally made my day today, and just for that I'm going to go work on chapter 13! Once again, there is no way I'm making a percentage for that number so just thanks again!

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Review #5, by Blue Biro Reveal

27th June 2010:
W-O-W thats all i'm saying.fine i lied, of course i couldnt only say that, but amazing chapter!
so much dramione!
you know i love that!
must read on!
becky :) x
63478681326461263476342786 / 10!
you rock!
;p

Author's Response: I'm not even going to try to make up a percentage for that! Thanks so much! You are so making my day!

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Review #6, by Blue Biro Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

27th June 2010:
aw, draco has a heart? who would of thought it?
amazing chappie, again, amazing writing as usual!
you rock!( agaain!)
becky :) x
loved it!
100 billion/10!
;p

Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you. 1,000,000,000,000,000%? you definately are crazy in a very good way.

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Review #7, by Blue Biro The Lake

27th June 2010:
a whole lot of dramione comming up you say? well, thats certainly ogod news, especialy as hermione just seems to have blacked out!
suspense much!?!
must read more!
loved it!
becky ;) x

Author's Response: yeah, suspense a lot. thanks!

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Review #8, by Blue Biro Kindly Luncheon

27th June 2010:
loving the long chapter! more please!
aw, so most of the women dont mind that much about blood?
well, cant wait for chapter 9!
loved it!
becky :) x
;p
1 billion/10!

Author's Response: yup, the women are pretty nice. Thanks for the review. 10,000,000,000%? wow.

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Review #9, by Blue Biro Summons

27th June 2010:
aw, can i smack draco? please? can you smack draco? can sombody please smack him, the boy's delusional
*death glares in his direction*
he's such an ass towards hermione! could she hit him?
just once?
also, could voldy get swin flu and die? the world would be a better place
loved the chapter!
becky :) x
;p

Author's Response: Now, now. Let's not kill Draco - he's very important in the story. Perhaps I'll put a good smack in there sometime just for you. Unfortunately, I don't think that swine flu would wipe out the horcruxes too. lol. Thanks so much!

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Review #10, by Blue Biro Dream Birds

27th June 2010:
aw, so funny to watch draco squirm!
cant wait for mor eof your amazing writing!
loved it!
becky :) x
;p
1 billion/10!

Author's Response: 10,000,000,000,000%? Geez. I'm gonna have to work on my math if you keep this up! lol. thanks.

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Review #11, by Blue Biro Small Changes

27th June 2010:
aw, so Narcissa doesnt belive in all that mmudblood rubbish? well, good for her, and even better for Hermione!
loved the chapter!
:p
becky :) x
100 million/10! you rock!

Author's Response: yup. 1,000,000,000%? you're kinda crazy! But that's awesome! Thanks!

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Review #12, by Blue Biro Answers, a Map, and a Surprise

27th June 2010:
one guess as to who the guy is? draco perhaps? or am i compltly wrong?
cant wait for more!
becky :) x
10 million/10!
;p

Author's Response: you're right. 100,000,000%? wow. Thanks. :D

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Review #13, by Blue Biro Questioning

27th June 2010:
what a cliff hanger! wow, amazing chapter as per usual!
loving where this story is going, you're an amzing author!
you rock!
becky :) x
1 millino /10!
;p

Author's Response: 10%? wow. Thanks so much!

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Review #14, by Blue Biro It Begins

27th June 2010:
another great chapter!
*gasp* she's meeting voldemort? that can't be good.cnat wait to see what happens next!
loved it!
100/10!
becky :) x
;p

Author's Response: 100/10? what's that? like 1000%? thank you for the review!

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Review #15, by Blue Biro Imprisonment

27th June 2010:
wow, amazing first chapter! a few of my friends said this story was briliant, and they were right!
your writing is so addictive, ive only read the first chapter and im hooked, you're seriously talented!
i love the plot line as well, very original and i read so many dramione at school fics, so this is a great change for me!
i review every chapter but my reviews are short becuase i like to read on fast so forgive me in advance!
love dthe chapter, must read more!
your newest fan: becky :) x
you rock! (fact!)
10/10! ;p

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I don't think I'm going to be able to stop smiling for awhile. :D

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Review #16, by romeoxjuliet The Break-up

22nd June 2010:
oh my god, cant wait for the next chapter!!! love love love your story :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #17, by NotSuchAPrincessAlex The Break-up

15th June 2010:
Well hurry gurl! i lovve this story and cant wait till the end of this week to be done with exams and read more of this beautiful story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I guess I better go work on chapter 13 then. :)

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Review #18, by NotSuchAPrincessAlex Kindly Luncheon

15th June 2010:
this is getting good post more please!

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Review #19, by ness17 The Break-up

14th June 2010:
aww poor hermione :( good chapter though :)

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

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Review #20, by xXSeamus_and_DeanXx Dream Birds

14th June 2010:
I think they way Draco acts is spot on but Hermione should say something, nasty as well and kind of be stand off-ish.

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Review #21, by xXSeamus_and_DeanXx Answers, a Map, and a Surprise

14th June 2010:
Um, a couple of things. First off I love it and the plot and the characters are pretty straight on except I thing Hermione needs to be a little more hot tempered. Just a tad. ;) and they should put more, like bodyguards on her I think. And than she sneaks into the library and stuff. I just think that's a little more Hermione. But whatever it's well written. Sooo.yes.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll definately think about your suggestions.

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Review #22, by sabrina The Break-up

14th June 2010:
hey! this is really good... be sure to write soon! xoxo

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm going to try.

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Review #23, by slithern_ice_elf The Break-up

13th June 2010:
very good, except for that whole 'no kiss' thing. but i am sure that when you get around to writing that, it will be really good. :) that wasnt much of a break-up, because they werent really together, but it was still sad. i cannot wait for chapter 13!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Yay! Sadness! (wow. That sounds really weird. What I mean is that it was supposed to be sad and I'm happy that it transferred.) Love ya.

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Review #24, by ness17 Reveal

13th June 2010:
awww isnt he sweet lol, great chapter!!

Author's Response: Yeah. Thanks for the review!

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Review #25, by Hp Fanatic It Begins

8th June 2010:
Tituba! Like from the Crucible! Yay allusions!

Author's Response: Yay! Somebody got it! Thanks!

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