{reviewid: 2036837, reviewer: 'natholius'}
20th January 2009:
This is a great Chapter, Great background and intros. Sounds like you have the story mostly populated. Looking forward to the next one.
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{reviewid: 2036240, reviewer: 'Sara93'}
19th January 2009:
I like James P.O.V. the most :D then Albus and then Lily!
Anyway great chapter can't wait until the next one
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{reviewid: 2036157, reviewer: 'doratonks4evr'}
19th January 2009:
Love this story! Very interesting! Keep it up 10/10
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{reviewid: 2032583, reviewer: 'unknown'}
14th January 2009:
Great story. It was really good. cant wait to read more.
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{reviewid: 2031052, reviewer: 'Mel'}
12th January 2009:
Oh! This is great! I really love it! Brilliant idea! 10/10 Update soon!
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{reviewid: 2030922, reviewer: 'Sara'}
12th January 2009:
I didn't think it was confusing. It was great i really liked it. cant wait for more :)
10/10
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{reviewid: 2030884, reviewer: 'no%20name'}
12th January 2009:
This was AWEsome! Great job! :D cant wait to read more
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{reviewid: 2030883, reviewer: 'Tony_11'}
12th January 2009:
This was great! Write more!!!
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{reviewid: 2030882, reviewer: 'Megan'}
12th January 2009:
Great first chapter! I feel like this will be a great story so update soon!
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{reviewid: 2030765, reviewer: 'natholius'}
12th January 2009:
really great chapter. I believe that this is a promising story, and I really hope to read it thorough until the end.
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