{reviewid: 2648830, reviewer: 'Dix'}
25th January 2012:
oh my god I LOVED IT!!!
please write a sequel! i'm dying to know what happens to Sirius and Mary after Hogwarts!
Good job:)
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{reviewid: 2089714, reviewer: 'vampirechick1823'}
5th April 2009:
if you havent written a sequal you definetly should please it rocked my black blue and yellow checkered socks off!
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{reviewid: 2061062, reviewer: 'super_girl101'}
22nd February 2009:
this was good ,but a little short
ya know?
but still good!:)
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{reviewid: 2052586, reviewer: 'thecoolestdork13'}
9th February 2009:
That was quite good, even if it was a little short. Short but sweet.
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{reviewid: 2044398, reviewer: 'Gutterflower'}
29th January 2009:
You have to do a sequel.
You can't just leave it there?! How long has he loved her? How come? Does she love him back? AH. Really good.
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{reviewid: 2042593, reviewer: 'vic'}
27th January 2009:
yes yes! plz write a sequel i like this story it was very cute.
plz write a sequal.
xo
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. A sequel is in the works. I'm not sure when it will be posted though.
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{reviewid: 2039827, reviewer: 'lauralovessirius'}
24th January 2009:
definantly interested i liked it
sounds like a good beginning to a story...
Author's Response: I am in the process of outlining a sequel-so who knows?
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{reviewid: 2038804, reviewer: 'Ellaoptimistic'}
22nd January 2009:
I AM! *Jumps up and down excitedly* I'M INTERESTED IN A SEQUEL!
Pretty please? This fic was AMAZING. I loved it.
Author's Response: Your vote's been counted. Lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 2037315, reviewer: 'Mia'}
20th January 2009:
Good story, and I would love a sequel. Perhaps a little longer?
Author's Response: Alright, a sequel is very likely by this point.
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{reviewid: 2036431, reviewer: 'anne_'}
19th January 2009:
wow it was really good! I'm glad I gave it up, it was much better than I could ever made it! Good Job
-aaa
Author's Response: Thank you for giving it up. ;) I couldn't have written it if you hadn't.
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{reviewid: 2033871, reviewer: 'LadyBlack_'}
16th January 2009:
Not bad: you're an excellent writer with a wonderful style. I have to confess, though that your plot and charcterization seemed a bit cliché to me. The lovely, heart-broken girl, always a bit on the average side matched up with Sirius has been done very often. Also, I believe that no matter what, Sirius would never just tell a girl he loved her. However, it was wonderfully written piece and don't mind me too much: I'm a bit prejuiced against her type of girl and despite that your story was really nice to read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for both the compliments and the concrit. I do seem to have most of my issues in the characterization department in all of my stories. I'm glad that you enjoyed it even with your prejudices.
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