I don't think this chapter is horrible at all! all i'm wondering is how draco never realized that his crush and his best friend look exactly the same? keep writing and happy whatever-ing! (lol i'm such a spaz sometimes ^_^) bye till next time!
-moonAuthor's Response: Haha thank you for your reply and Thanks for telling my my story was good. aboout the draco thing and he not realizing his best friend and crush were twins well that is just something we will have to wait and see how it plays out. I will try and get another chapter out soon but ive been really busy with ap tests and finals and everything skool lol so all i can do is promise to try my best
Thanks again for sending in a reply makes my day erm night i mean :P
~Isabella Report Review
i literally SCREAMED when i found out who hermione's mom was. all i could think about was the triwizard tournament and hermione holding rita the bug in a jar and hating her with every fiber in her body. . . i think i'm gonna like this. ^-^ oh, and i know the feeling when it comes to updating, trust me! hope you get off soon! byee!Author's Response: HAHA thanks you just made my day!!! I am currently looking for motivation for the third chapter ive started it almost three times and just dont like how its going :( i will try to get up a new chapter soon.HAHA and yes that was my plan with rita skeeter being hermiones mom its adds some humor!
-Isabella Report Review
Don't worry, it's good, not horrible (since you put more details than I do).Author's Response: thank you for your review! Thanks for telling me it wasn't horrible that made my day! Report Review
I love it!
it's the kind of plot I'm writing, just not Dramione.
i like those kind of story and this one was one of my favorites.
please Update ASAP! it's really good chapter and I am waiting!
Red_Rose_For_Love.Author's Response: haha idk i have no idea how i came up with it ... i got bored in one of my classes lol and thanks that makes me really happy !!! I am really glad you left a review and liked it! I will update soon I just have to type it! i have a chapter written but i decided i didn't like it so i am rewriting it! thanks for the review!
-Isabella- Report Review
Oh, please hurry and post more. I like this story already. you're a good writer. keep it up!Author's Response: aww thank you, I am sorry to say this, but i have the next chapter written, but I can not post it because it is not typed.it is another background chapter and i am sad to say there will be a couple more like that before it gets to the dramione and adventures. I worked really hard on this chapter so it pleases me that you liked it. Thanks, If you like my style of writing you can check out a story that i co-wrote with my best friend its called Unwanted Engagements by crystal snape we just posted ch. 5 for that one its just waiting to be validated.
P.s. I have to type the next chapter up but i am currently grounded so when i get a chance i will and keep reviewing me likes them :) I will try and post it as soon as i can. Thanks for your review,
-Isabella Report Review
I made you the chapter image you asked for.
go on the link I spaced out and you should find the html code at the bottom of the page.
hope you like it:
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good chapter keep updating.10/10 =]Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review I'm glad you liked it! THank you also for the beautiful chapter image! Report Review
Very interesting idea, but please stop with the comments from you in the middle of the story. I guess its supposed to be funny but its breaking upp the story. Chose whom to be the narrator: hermione, rose or yourself and it will be much better. Please continue. The story can be great and Im a sucker for au fics. Just get in to it and you will have at least one faithfull reader.Author's Response: yeah i know i read it afterwards but i was waiting for the publication of another story correction so i will take that out! Thanks for your review ... the next ch. is going to be out soon as well! i just have to get it typed up! Report Review
Sorry I'm noy a gryffie! this is a really good storyAuthor's Response: Haha i do think that everyone does have an inkling of gryffindor courage in them though lol thanks for your review! Report Review
o, i've never read this plot before! how original!!! sooo, i'm gonna actually try to do a good review (like the ones my teacher makes me do when your supposed to tell your classmates whats good and bad about their story) anywayy...1.i luv luv luv the plot 2.i like the descriptions(ugh, i know saying "i like the descriptions" sounds a lot lamer than it is, so sorryy 3.i love how hermione has to deal with rita skeeter as her mother, since she hates rita skeeter :D, wel, please write me another chapter, and keep your fans all smiling!!-kellyAuthor's Response: THANKS a bunch for the Review!!! it made my day ! The descriptions ahhh this was the story that i tried really hard for character descriptions because i am really bad at that. its one of my weaknesses... haha i decided rita as hermione's mother because i thought it was funny cause im trying to incorporate humor into it... there is more to come i already have it written i just have to type it ! and one more thing ! I have fans? thanks! keep reading! Report Review
I liked it. Two questions tho- why doesn't Hermione look anything like Kingsly Shacklebolt? And why would Shacklebolt marry someone who obviously detested what he was working for?Author's Response: answer to your first question i personally can't remember what shacklebolt looked like ... i just needed a character that wasn't overused as her parents ... such as the zambinis
her parents aren't really that important to the plot line... so it doesn't matter.
answer to your second question is that this is a fanfic and anything can happen... such as don't draco and hermione detest each other but people write them paired up all the time
all lot of the reason i picked skeeter and shacklebolt is because both of them are too much into work to care about their daughters. Report Review
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