Ohmigawd!! That was sooo cuute!! I loved itt!!Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
i would love to her song! i love the story BTWAuthor's Response: Thank you. Can you send me a message? It's rather long so I'd rather put it in a message instead. Report Review
Aww, adorable! I love it. I also want to hear her song. Maybe you could put it in the author's response? 10/10Author's Response: Thank you. Would that work or would messaging me work better 'cause it's rather long. . . . .? Report Review
I loved it! It was so cute, with a perfectly sappy ending, I was just wondering what her name was, I never heard it mentioned in the story(:Author's Response: The entire time I gave hints of what her name was. I was going to have like a little thing to guess her name but I guess I won't. I'll just leave it a mystery. :) Report Review
Whooo! I love it! Can't you post the lyrics to her song somewhere here? I'd like to see it. You have written a beautiful story, congratulations.Author's Response: Thank you!! I don't know. However, if you message me, I think I can send you them. . . . Report Review
Aww that was soo sweet and fantastic! The title just suits the story! Thanks for the fab read! I love all your characters, they are just so spunky! great storyline, although Sirius is a little thick! LOL Loved it all the same!
Cheers!Author's Response: Of course he's thick--he's a guy!! Lol. A lot of my titles go along perfectly with the story; whether it's a quote or it's just so easy to understand but deep. Thank you for the review!! Glad somebody finally answered! Report Review
i would like to read the lyrics!!!
LOVE the sorry!!!
ps. please update soon!Author's Response: Is there a way to message? Because I don't know another way to let you read them. . . . Report Review
I was looking for this story! It was named something different before, wasn't it?
Wonderful new chapter, I can't wait for the last one! Please, post it soon =DAuthor's Response: No, it wasn't. I just finally took the time to post it. :) The next chapter I'll update next week; I won't have time this weekend. Report Review
PLEASE UPDATE! PLEZ IWANNA NO WAT HAPPENS!Author's Response: Way ahead of you!! :) Updated today!! Sorry for the wait!! Report Review
ooh, amazing last line! i absolutely love this story, please write more soon, im addicted!
xxxAuthor's Response: Gracias, senorita!! Report Review
this is seriously amazing! so not your typical sirius/oc, i have to say that i love it - loads!
ps could you check out my story 'three little words'? thanksAuthor's Response: Thank you so much. I'll do so now. Just to warn you, my criticism is very blunt and very honest. I'll write a review for it when you send me a message saying you understand. Deal? :) Report Review
okay, her aunt is crazy, really good chapter, excellantly written!
xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks. Now that I think about her aunt is basically like my mom, two aunts, and sort of like me--loud, crazy, and doesn't care what most people think. :) Thanks. Report Review
oh my gosh, this is such an amazing idea and beautifully written - hard to believe that it is your first story on this site, well done!
xxxAuthor's Response: Definitely my first stoy on this site--because it was short and the only one that was finished--but it's far from my first story or my favorite story.
My favorite story is a Harry/OC which I'm going to start putting up as soon as I put up the last chapter of this one. So if you wanna check that out soon. :) Report Review
I can't wait for the next chapter.!
I love it, keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thanks so much!! New chapter up!! Report Review
Really good :)
Please hurry up and finish the next chapter =)Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry took so long for replying and updating but I'm going to fix EVERYTHING and become more dedicated to this site. Report Review
I can understand your predicament with the whole sing, sung, etc. I was trying to think of other words but couldn't come up with any, until you wrote that she shouted...that's when I thought belted. Common term, especially in musical theater. Think of words that maybe describe the sound of their voices, like trumpeted, screeched, etc. Now that I think of it, most words like that would describe bad singing...
I would say, for the most part though, you don't need to say that they're singing. Maybe just at the emotional points of the character.
Hope this helped a bit.Author's Response: Thank you!! After I typed the first chapter, I was like "but sung doesn't really cover how he says it--and how he says it reflects his personality." But it's all covered now. Thanks!! Report Review
This is really good. Keep it up! Don't stop.
PounceAuthor's Response: thank you!! sorry i took so long to reply. Report Review
Oh, I really like the idea of this story! I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Okay, I'm REALLY sorry I took so long to respond but thank you!! It's a short story and I've already typed "the end" but it's been hard for me to update but I'm going to fix that!! New chapter. Report Review
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