This is a amazing book, I beg you to keep on writing a am addicted to this story :) please keep on writing this story I love it so so so much :D this is so good I don't think you can rate it :D love it !

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I love when Vic and teddy are alone together they are so sweet :)

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The best story ever so cute I wish I was Vic :D

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The best story :) so cool, I love it so much! So devastating when Vic sees teddy and that Chloe girl kissing :( love this story so much :D

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Awesome:) want to know what happens next , so cool it is like moden day hogwarts/ Harry potter :) love it :D

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Really cool !! I liked it a lot :) you should write a book and publish it !! I am a big fan of hp and I like the story you have created :)

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Awesome ;)
I would like to know what happens in the next chapters !!! Good job to the person who wrote this :D love this story hope the rest of it is as good ;)

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way too many times using "icy", "icily", "ice" as descriptors.

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Victoire is completely adorable. I wish that Teddy were reciprocating all that adorableness. Is it just Chloe that has him holding back combined with Cameron's doubts or is there something else? He seems really distant. It is distressing.

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Seriously? He makes it sound so easy. I cannot believe he said she wouldn't have him in front of her whole family. I was completely - just - it was not a good moment; I may not agree with Victoire in all things but I agree with her reaction to that. They are both rather childish when prodding each other and he brings the fun out in her; they are well suited. He likes her. Aw.

I very much did not like that Dominique came into Victoire's room and confronted her only to insult her when Victoire reacted defensively. I mean, it's not as though she is inclined to admit such a thing when addressed so confrontational-y.

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I'm in love with this book- I read about half last night and I couldn't stop thinking about all day at school! Very nice plotline, but be careful of it becoming a cliche. Can't wait to see what Chloe does:)

Luffles from,

FiFi

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you like it! That happens to me a lot with other stories, too. I will try to steer clear of any cliches. Thanks for reading and reviewing! xx

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Well, first of all, WRITE MORE!!! PLEASE!!!
Anyway, for the prediction. Somehow, Chloe will try to break Vick's heart, Teddy's heart, or rip apart their romance. I hope not. I hope Teddorie declares their love publicly, and or publicly breaks up with Chloe. I hope Teddy tells Vick the truth about what the Chloe situation.

Author's Response: I will try to update soon!
I like your prediction... but its not entirely right. You'll just have to wait and read to see what happens!
Thanks for reading! xx

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Set off at a very nice, quick pace!
Poor Vick!



. Teddy's a jerk.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the beginning! Yeah, poor Victoire... and hopefully you won't feel that way about Teddy after later chapters. Thanks so much for reading! :)

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jeeze. trouble in paradise so soon?!
can't wait for your update! =)

Author's Response: It was never going to be paradise for these two. Hopefully I'll be able to update soon! Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing all the chapters, I really appreciate it! :)

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YAY!!!
btw, the scene with the family was simply inspired. i just ADORE meddling family members. XD

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it because I loved writing it. They're the best for awkward tension. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)

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haha, dom sounds like my kinda girl! these two need someone to get them to stop dancing around one another and to commit to SOME course of action, and i think dom's up to the task. =D

Author's Response: I love writing Dom! Yeah, but they're both so blind to each other's feelings. Dom will help... but she can't do everything. Thank you for reading! :)

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okay, i REALLY don't like victoire's friends. but whatever. i'm sure you know what you're doing. ;D

Author's Response: Me neither, but they're sort of important for the plot. Haha, thank you for reading and reviewing! :)

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uhm, okay, where the heck did victoire come from?! and felix felicis, huh? NICE one, cam.

Author's Response: She definitely had bad timing. Yeah, Cameron and Felix Felicis proved to be interesting. Thanks for reading! :)

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i'm not too fond of vic's friends, but i'm glad that she (somewhat) made amends with teddy. this is really interesting. i couldn't stop smiling whilst teddy was trying to explain what happened the night before. LOVE it!

Author's Response: Yeah, they're not the greatest. I'm glad you think so! And I'm glad you like their awkward tension. Thank you so much for reading! :)

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this sounds REALLY great so far. i'm glad i found your story and i'm excited to see where it goes! XD

Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I'm glad you think so :) I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Wow, I was not expecting that. I hope Chloe doesn't mess everything up too badly. But I love that everything with Teddy and Victoire still aren't perfect.

This was a really good chapter :D

Author's Response: I'm glad that something in this story wasn't totally predictable. Well, she's not one to go down easily. Nothing's perfect and their new relationship isn't going to go too smoothly..

Aw, thank you, I'm really glad you liked it :)

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great story!! i just read it through and i absolutely love it!! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy that you do! I will try! Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)

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Aww. It was so sweet. Great story. Thanks xx

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Although, it isn't over yet. No, thank you for reading! :)

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Wonderful story! I loved how it ended!

Author's Response: Thank you! Oh and it isn't the end! I meant the end of the chapter in my author's note... there's still more to come! Thanks for reading!



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no.
Duude :/
Why do you do this to me? To THEM?
jas xx

Author's Response: It's not over yet! Thanks for reading!

Amandax

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