This is Shannon btw. Oh, i understand now. Wow, it will be a complex story though. Good luck. I shall continue reading it. XDAuthor's Response: Oh! Hi! Glad to see you've gotten an account :D
You've seen the movie? It's awesome, but really difficult to put into words. I don't exactly know how to continue with this story, but hopefully my mind will clear up and I'll be able to continue. Thanks for the support though! :D Report Review
Oh, I was on the edge of my seat as I read both the Prologue and the First Chapter :)
Though it is kind of confusing, it's enthralling.
I liked it!Author's Response: Hey :D
Eeps, sorry it's taken FOREVER for me to respond to this review. But most of my exams for the term are finally over, so I can finally have some time to do what I want. ;D
I'm really glad you liked the story! It's kind of difficult trying to duplicate the same feeling I had when I was watching the movie.
Although... my mind's pretty bogged up and I have no idea how to continue with the story. Hopefully I'll get things going soon enough :D
Thanks for the review! :D Report Review
What the hell? atm, i am kinda confused about the whole thing.Author's Response: Ahh, sorry 'bout that.
I think I'm going to have to abandon this or something.
This is actually using a plot from the movie, "The Butterfly Effect", and another reviewer told me this story probably wouldn't make sense if the reader didn't watch the movie initially.
The plot is supposed to unravel itself in time, but now I'm having second thoughts on how I'm supposed to go on with it.
Ah well. Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
OMG NO! and apparently this has to be 20 characters long, so there you go. lolAuthor's Response: Haha, hello. Thanks for the reviews, I've addressed the one above already. :D
Although I think I'm going to be abandoning this story, I highly suggest watching "The Butterfly Effect" :D It's awesome! :) Report Review
You cant leave it there!!! Please continue this story, im anxious to see where you take it. Please write more soon!Author's Response: Hey again xD
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I'm sorry I kept you hanging there! xP I'll try to post the next chapter as soon as I can! I've gotten at least half of it done already :D. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I watched the Butterfly Effect some years ago and I thought it was a pretty interesting movie. But it seemed a little harsh to me to see Scorpius acting like this, even if I know he must have legitimate reasons...
All I can say it's that the beginning it's pretty good, but it's going to be hard to write this, and for your readers it's almost a must to have had seen or heard about the movie.
Good story!:)Author's Response: Hello :)
I love that movie. I've only watched it last year on DVD though. (The movie and DVD have different endings) I thought a lot about it, and I tried to unravel the plot and complications, and I found it really interesting. I knew it would be difficult to write, but I decided to take up the challenge :)
Ah, I'm sorry I had to write Scorpius so harshly. I wanted the effect of each change to be very drastic and impactful.
Thanks for the review :) Report Review
Kool...but what i wanna know is...what happened? LOL good story keep it up!Author's Response: Hello :D Haha, you'll see in the next chapters to come. :) The plot will thicken :D I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Thanks for the review! Report Review
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