Poor Angelina. :( I really enjoyed that she still saw Mrs. Weasley - that she still has that connection with her dead fiance's family, despite her growing attachment to George. It makes me glad that they have each other to help them mourn the loss of Fred.
George and Angelina's confrontation broke my heart. On one hand, I can totally see why Angelina wants to avoid George. She's definitely confused about her feelings for George, if they're genuine or if she only loves him because he reminds her so much of Fred...but I think she should give them a chance for her to find more reasons to fall in love with George and not the idea of George as Fred. Does that make sense? Haha.
I love that she still talks to Katie and that she's asking for advice from one of her closest friends. It seems very realistic. I hope things work out for her and George. They both need some happiness in their lives!Author's Response: This story was the harder of the two to write so far. I know her facing Fred's funeral was tough and sad, but this explored her feelings of not only missing him, but it brings in her hesitance to be around George. And it was difficult. I wanted it realistic, and I wanted those emotions. I figure she just needs time to figure out that it's okay to like George, that Fred would not hate her for it, that she shouldn't hate herself for it. And that definitely will be epxlored in the next one!
And what you said did make sense. She needs to give herself some credit, and give him a chance.
I'm very glad you enjoyed this! I'm working on the next part...well, trying to pin down the next good song. I also apoogize if this makes no sense what so ever. I am a little more than half asleep, yet I can't sleep.don't ask how that works, I don't know...
Anyways, thanks again!
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I think this story is interesting and that it's going to be good at the end, not that it's not good now. about the song, have you heard 'stop crying your eyes out' by oasis?.
can not wait for the next trilogy. :7
And Merry Christmas.Author's Response: Yeah, I'm really excited because I am going to start working on the last one-shot of the trilogy today, and maybe even get it up. And I have never heard of that song, but i looked it up, and it actually may work. I really do like it, so now i'm not sure of which song i'm gonna use.
Thanks for the song idea and the review! Hopefully you also had a Merry Christmas. Happy New Year?
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That was so sad, but also fantastically done! I really enjoyed it.
The characterization as wonderful. :) I couldn't help but try to relate to Angie. It really made me want to give her a nice big hug. XD
And the descriptions! Yeah, those were great too. I really, really loved it.
Thanks so much for entering the challenge!
- RinAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm soo glad you loved the way I wrote it! I worked hard on making the confusion and the sadness (if that's a word) real. I wanted there to be a connection, and I think I nailed it.
Your welcome for entering the challange. It was awesome!
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What a fantastic idea. I mean, the whole she could possibly be in love with him because he's practically his twin thing. That's just phenomenal. There are a couple of grammar/spelling mistakes. You miss a couple commas here and there, but that's not too big of a deal.
Because your not welcome here
It should be "you're" for "you are".
I really enjoyed this. It was a nice, human piece. Hmmm, I was trying to think of a song for your final piece, but there's not much coming to mind just yet. I can PM you if I think of anything, if you'd like. :)
Great job!Author's Response: Yeah, spelling isn't really my strong point...and I do type it in a word document, but for some reason it won't do grammar check. I will start to type it in Microsoft word now that I have it. I will go through and re-read and correct it. Thanks for the tips on that though.
I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. I worked pretty hard and this, and if you do come up with a song that kinda fits, you can PM. That'd be really awesome! My display name on the forums is Nymphie Tonks, just in case that makes it easier to find.
Thanks for reading! Thanks for the review!
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Hey Grim. This was a great story/one-shot or w/e u want to call it. I just wish that it was as sad as the first one. lol jk . I still loved it though. :D
I have no idea what the song for the next one should be. I'm not very good at choosing songs to fit. Normally I choose stories to fit songs. hehe.
MagykAuthor's Response: Nicee Magyk! Glad you liked it. And the next one won't be very sad either. More happy. lol.
Thanks for the review Magyk!!!
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