Very very well plotted story -- you are a most talented writer. I liked nearly everything about your novel, but was especially impressed by how plausible all of the character's actions were. Everything flowed beautifully, and showed just how talented you are. Thanks so much for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words.
I'm working on an original at the moment, but have a triology that you may be interested in. It starts with Creating A Ghost. That was the first story I ever wrote. I hope you enjoy them. Although, I do have to say (not meaning to steer you away from this site) but the final, updated versions are on two other sites that I'm not allowed to mention here. I haven't gotten around to updating them here yet, but it is on my schedule of things to do.

Here or there, I hope you keep reading and let me know what you think.

Dani

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ohh i so loved the chapter and i can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: It's almost over...

Dani

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oh wow looks like we know who came out of the closet, can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Which one? It's coming to a quick close.

Dani

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oh wow what a sad chapter, can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Soon, my friend. Soon.

Dani

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ohh looks like albus saw everything, can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: You think? Maybe, maybe not...

I'm going to be posting quickly. We're near the end. I want to get it finished.

Then, I'll be reposting the trilogy with some connecting touches and a final polish.

Thanks for being so faithful. Others read, but you're the only one to review on this site.

Dani

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aww what a sweet chapter, can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Happy to please. A new one will be up later today.

Dani

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ohh i am on the edge of my seat now hope add again soon.

Author's Response: The next one is up.

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oohh that must of been the begining that started everything of tom not liking albus, can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Next is up. Hope you like it.

Dani

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ohhh wow what a cliffie can't wait to read what happens next.

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oh wow looks like some cracks are starting to show in their relationship, can't wait to read more.

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i am happy that he finally let some of the pressure and the stress out, can't wait to read what he tells elizabett on why he is crying. hope u add again soon.

Author's Response: It was good to write a human side of Albus. In the later books/movies, he seems so infallible, that nothing gets to him (at least until the last movie/book.) It's good to see a sensitive side now and again.

Dani

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wow she must have really shocked him, can't wait to read what happens next.

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oh wow can't wait to read about albus's duel. hope u add again soon.

Author's Response: The duel doesn't come for a while. Updating soon.

Dani

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oh wow i hope that everything is going to be ok for little edvard. hope u add again soon.

Author's Response: Edvard will be fine in time. I hate it when people/parents take out their own frustrations on kids. It's not fair.

Dani

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i am loving it!
Please read my story too : The bench next to the lake.. I just begun

Author's Response: Glad your loving it. Although it stands alone, it's also a prequel to the "Creating a Ghost" trilogy.

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well at least she now knows that is what gellbert is angry about.

Author's Response: But, how will she handle it? And, why did she pick up on Thomas' pain? And, where's Albus? Hmmm...

Dani

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i am glad that she was able to tell her husband her feelings, some people just keep it inside till it explodes. BRAVO!

Author's Response: Ah, but will he really listen? Promises, promises...

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ohh i hope elizabett is feeling better soon, i am happy that she is trying to help out with the resistance but she and thomas are both walking a very thin line, hope u have a very happy christmas and a happy new year.

Author's Response: The line gets very thin. I'm up to chapter 54 at the moment...
The solstice is on Monday. The tree is up and decorated. And, some of the cooking is done (more tomorrow).
I love this season!

Dani

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i am glad that he told her where he went, can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Kind of sweet, isn't he? I always thought that he was a man with a lot of baggage. I'm glad he shared some of the load.

Dani

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i luved the chapter, i hope she stays home and doesn't go to gellert again, hope u add again soon. 10's all around.

Author's Response: Oh, but, things are just getting interesting...

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ohh looks like someone has some splaining to do. can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Ahh, but who will she be 'splainin' to?

Dani

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looks like the past does come out to haunt you, can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Boo!

It's on the way.

:-D

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What an adorable scene! And Slughorn is still in te background, fuming...

Author's Response: Ah, the relationship grows... but how far will it go? Keep reading. I really appreciate your feedback. So few people actually leave a review. Thank you.
Dani

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Wow...and the plot thickens...Her parents are such compassionate people for not judging Elizabett for who she is. What a chapter!

Author's Response: And to think they were Slytherins (or at least her father was). You see, not all Slytherins are bad...
Dani

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Wow...rising conflict! I'm impressed by Slughorn AND Elizabett's audacity. Well done!

Author's Response: There should always be a little conflict to keep things real. :-D
Dani

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