Not the worst I've read, but not great either.
I absolutely DESPISE that you made Sirius and Remus gay, and I DETEST it. It's like disgracing their image. Not to mention, gross.
4/10

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it was ok, not one of my favourites (sorry..), but it wasn't bad. i really dont like how u made remus and sirius a couple tho... it totally threw the story off for me. i am very sirius straight/ remus straight pro, so.. it was alright, but the slash kinda ruined it for me. sorry if this isnt the best review but, hey, its constructive critisium! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I like to get constructive critisium. Personally I like Sirius/Remus stories, but I do see them as straight rather than gay. When I write them as a pairing, I only do it during Hogwarts time when people experiment with their sexuality. A lot of teenagers decide on their sexuality through experimentation.
Sorry that it threw you off the story, but most schools do have a couple of homosexual people (my school included)
Lollie :D

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Aww that was so sweet, About to cry lol
Happy Holidays
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Wow, I'm amazed that one of my stories affected someone that much, lol.
Lollie :D

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“What I’m trying to say is…the words I want to say are…what is this so hard…" should have "why is this so hard"

“As Head Girl I should condone you of that behaviour, but, I’ll let you get off with a warning” should have "shouldn't condone you".

Other than that, good!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yes it is supposed to be why. Sorry about that error. And the second one is supposed to be should becuase PDA is not acceptable behaviour at Hogwarts and the common room is a public place.
Lollie :D

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aaaw that was really cute! You wrote it really well, and I liked how you showed the two different times in one one-shot!

Only criticism i have is that some of the names were a bit off-putting and didn't seem to fit, but having said that they suited the characters!

Loved it, so 9/10 amazing stuff (i love a good one-shot, and this really was one!)

Love Pygmy x

Author's Response: Thanks Pygmy for your review. I normally write about Marauder era only but i decided to incorperate two different eras.

Sorry the names are off putting, they are just names I really like. Ever since I heard a word that had nyce on the end I loved it as a name.

I'm really happy you thought this was a really good one shot.
Lollie :D

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that was a really good read :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm happy to know it was a good read.
Lollie :D

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