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Review #1, by DimondMoon New Chances

12th January 2009:
This looks like it's going to be a fun story to read, I can't wait to see more chapters up.
I don't usually give out grammar advice so you shouldn't ever see this again, but through this chapter I noticed about 6 or 7 times you accidentally changed it from 1st person to 3rd person. Nothing major but I though you should know.
Rating: 10/10

Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait on the reply. It was originally 3rd person, so when I finish all my assignments, I'll try and fix it.

Thanks for the review

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