{reviewid: 2383907, reviewer: 'holly'}
23rd July 2010:
its really good ,i like it , its interesting
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{reviewid: 1787869, reviewer: 'Swiftstar'}
12th January 2008:
Please, please, please write more on this story. I know the status says that it's abandoned, but I implore you not to abandon it, and to take it up again. It has the potential to develope into a reat story, but you need to find your passion in it again. PLEASE! Anyway, now that my imploring is done, i thought you would like to know that I LOVED it!
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{reviewid: 1778034, reviewer: 'LDR'}
4th January 2008:
A really good start was really engaging and enjoyed it a lot
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{reviewid: 1679460, reviewer: 'Emily%20Lupin'}
22nd October 2007:
thats really good! im actually writing a story called ghost girl as a matter a fact. you should check it out and tell me what you think!
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{reviewid: 1560068, reviewer: 'quidditchsnitch7878'}
7th August 2007:
Really good , liked it a lot!
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{reviewid: 1555087, reviewer: 'enchantedrose'}
5th August 2007:
I really like where this is going...
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{reviewid: 1041360, reviewer: 'The%20Junebug'}
28th June 2006:
I really liked this chapter. I'll visit later to see if you update. Just a question, though. How come everytime James is thinking, his words are 'outlined' with those little squiggle things? hehe. Great job, keep it up!!!
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{reviewid: 1008445, reviewer: 'KathrynAmy13'}
2nd June 2006:
It okay. I like it
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{reviewid: 954239, reviewer: 'magic29'}
29th March 2006:
this is quite a good start
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{reviewid: 947220, reviewer: 'bill'}
22nd March 2006:
that was great
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{reviewid: 886911, reviewer: 'Sparks'}
2nd February 2006:
Some grammar/spelling issues, but otherwise a very good read. I liked it ♥
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{reviewid: 867714, reviewer: 'addictedtohp'}
21st January 2006:
ooh,i liked it!dsnt go way toooo off jk rowlings plan and thats good=)really enjoyed it,write more!=)~addicted
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{reviewid: 838234, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
2nd January 2006:
Lily suddenly turns popular from being unpopular? Interesting. I always thought she was popular.
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{reviewid: 834144, reviewer: 'blue%20dragon'}
30th December 2005:
I think I've reviewed before, but I was rereading it and remembered I'd wanted to point out that you tend to use Lilly said, James said, Remus said, and always use said. Try mixing it up with other words like asked, if it's a question, cried, gasped or whatever, to make it fit better. 'Cause when Lilly just had her glasses broken don't you think she'd be a little upset or annoyed? Just a thought. Awesome story other wise.
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{reviewid: 832262, reviewer: 'blue%20dragon'}
29th December 2005:
This is REAL GOOD!!!!! Just after a period '.' there's two spaces. After a comma there's one ',' Just thought it'd help with the spacing, you know, make it a little easier to read. There were some places where you put the wrong form of the word like 'know-face-Evans' you know, simple stuff, but I guess it just stuck ou to me. I LUV it though!!! And I wanna see more up soon!!! Yeah!
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{reviewid: 822589, reviewer: 'Alex'}
22nd December 2005:
this was a good first chapter I really enjoyed it I hope that you write more so that i can read it thank you
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{reviewid: 790814, reviewer: 'Hazelnutter'}
30th November 2005:
oooooooooooh nice!
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{reviewid: 780341, reviewer: 'elle21'}
22nd November 2005:
lol, thanks for the help. it's great what gonna happen next??
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{reviewid: 751617, reviewer: 'kerry-lee'}
29th October 2005:
*next chapter please*
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{reviewid: 669825, reviewer: 'Ashley'}
27th August 2005:
I don't know if I have reviewd before in that case I'll just say it again you must update and keep writing cuz i wanna read your fic all to the end
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{reviewid: 669146, reviewer: 'jamesandlilyfreak'}
27th August 2005:
Okay if you ever write another story i may go my gryffindor gurl. So if you ever get one of them and there are corny jokes in their you know it's me. Good Story! Let's see what happens
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{reviewid: 647003, reviewer: 'Drunk%20Elves'}
14th August 2005:
Winky: wow. completely diffent from all of the other stories we has read!
Dobby: In a good way!
Winky: we likes!
dobby: Keep updating and THE DRUNK ELVES LOVE YOU!
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{reviewid: 615727, reviewer: 'Neczy'}
28th July 2005:
lol, update soon
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{reviewid: 588939, reviewer: 'dragon_aiden'}
11th July 2005:
you must continue working on this. it seems to have potential. its a good peice of work!
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{reviewid: 585632, reviewer: 'shortnsweet'}
9th July 2005:
omg that was awesome! i loved it and dont worry i hate the 'oddball of the bunch' too! update asap!
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