Who where these people?
I'm just wondering.
That was really good. Report Review
The fact that this chapter only has three reviews- now four- is sheer blasphemy. Your imagery was breathtaking and you kept the characters in character. sheer and utter brilliance. * favorites* Report Review
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I love how you didn't once mention Minerva's name and the present-tense just deepened things further. I can read this again and again without getting tired of it :)
-IAuthor's Response: Oh, wow, thank you so much! I'm really proud of this oneshot, and it makes me feel so wonderful to hear that other people enjoy it as well. Thanks for your lovely review! Report Review
wow, that was very good!!!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
very good read.
loved how you didn't use any dialouge till the very end.
made it flow so nicely.
i will def be reading your other work.
thanks for the good story, hailieAuthor's Response: Ooh, I hope you enjoy my other works as well! I'm really glad you liked this oneshot, though. :)
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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