really really good.The both are the perfect Pair Report Review
I thought this was beautiful. The way you captured the hurt and love between the two post-war. Very believable. Lovely job :)Author's Response: thanks for reading! Report Review
I LUV IT! I love love love love LOVE this story! I feel extremely happy right now. YAY! (Perfect grammar, too.)Author's Response: oh, wow...thank you! i'm glad you liked it :D Report Review
another cute fic. Ron and Hermione are one of my favourite couples. keep up the good work.^_^ 10/10 Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it! They're my favorite ship :D Report Review
Awww! That's so sweeet! Good job!Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!! :D Report Review
I think it was okay; some of the lines were repettive and I really didnt get the point of them apologizing again and again. Overall it was okay i didn't like it nor hate it.. 5/10Author's Response: thanks for reviewing anyway :) no hard feelings if you didn't like it!! Report Review
First of all: I'm so sorry for the delay! Because of the holidays, I wasn't on the forums much and I got out of habit of checking all my posts and such. I feel terrible that you had to wait so long! With that said, I thought this was a bit...depressing. Obviously. ^_^ I like how you kept it canon, mostly. The scar on her cheek...I don't know how canon that is, but it added intrigue. I always love fics that tell about afterward, because it's like a peek into what might have/did happen. Your fic was no exception. Nicely written and, again, sorry for the hold up!! Mrs Roonil WaslibAuthor's Response: oh, don't worry it's okay! :D i'm glad you liked it..i always tend to lean towards canon Report Review
Hello! This is Indigo Seas from the forums, here with the review you requested. Wow... that was an amazing one-shot. Really, it was very, very good. From the very beginning to the end, I loved every word of it. The only grammar things I could see were a couple of semi-colons and commas that needed to be moved around or removed. Other than that, though, it was a pretty clean piece of writing. The emotions here were so real. I loved it. You could really experience all of the anger and sadness and frustration the characters were feeling. It was great. Also, the description was fantastic. All the scenes you have of Ron remembering the battle were illustrated beautifully. I don't really have anything to complain about. Very, very well done! Thank you so much for requesting. - RinAuthor's Response: awe, thanks so much! and i'm glad i requested :D glad you liked it--i have a bundle of other R/Hr fics; check them out if you'd like. Report Review
Really great. You captured a very powerful moment and did very well with it. 10/10Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you liked it :]] Report Review
This is good . just like Ron . love it that it is his thoughts .Author's Response: thank you :]] Report Review
Hey, I really liked this story (of course as it is a R/Hr). You captured a very hard moment well. I did notice that you have them back at the Burrow, and this is just a conjecture, but I thought that they stayed the night of the battle at Hogwarts...? Maybe not, just thought I would mention it. I also noticed that you used the word shuttered instead of shuddered. Shutters are on a window... shudder is the movement. There were a couple of typo's though nothing major. Otherwise I think you captured a sweet moment of my favorite couple very nicely. It was sweet and innocent, yet not to innocent ;)Author's Response: thanks for reviewing =] i really liked How To Save A Wizard, too! yeah, i do have some flaws with typos [i type wayy too fast, as my friends are mostly jealous, haha] and however i do go back and check, but i probably just missed that one ^_^ i'm glad you liked it!! :]] Report Review
awesome! loved it Weasley is our king!Author's Response: thanks for reading & reviewing! :]] Report Review
That was great and you write very well conveying th thoughts of Ron in good detail. I don't have anything really to add because it was really good. I loved it. 10/10Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! i'm glad you liked it :]] Report Review
very nice and quite emotionalAuthor's Response: thanks for reading & reviewing :]] Report Review
Great story. Pretty much everyone makes it seem like right after the war everything was a-okay. After people go through a war like that it's only reasonable for us to assume that there will be scars to be healed, blood to be wiped, and tears to be shead. It'd take a while but not everthing is righted instantly. Thank you, your story gave me a fresher look on the lives of this couple after the war.Author's Response: thanks! your review made me smile :]] most of my other stories post-battle are like what you mentioned, so i figured i'd take a twist and go from someone's point of view i've never done before, and then do another twist with it. thanks for reading & reviewing!! Report Review
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