ohhh!! Evil! Draco :D

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Its one my favourites
Is it possible to love but hate the ending at the same time?
But definitely one of the best horror/love stories!

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I need more. PLEASE, write more...

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oh boy that was kinda creepy what malfoy had seen...but the story was good...

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OHHH GEEZ i love the last line. its so perfect

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aw... a nice little fic you got here. It was very cute. The only criticism I have is that in your segment splits, i had a tough time figuring out what was in the mirror, real life, and other scenes. I think maybe just fleshing scenes out with a little detail would fix this up right quick.

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Wow. Really intense ending. I really liked it though.
Personally I don't see draco being evil, but with JK Rowlings plot you can play with him so much. You could have him as just a misunderstood bully, or a person who grew dark because of the darkness around him. The last sentence really struck me, because he really does see her. He's see himself self destroying her and everyone like her. And the fact that he can touch her face and hide all of this, while lying to her face had me reeling back in shock. And he even smiles after he sees this!
Really loved this! Excellant job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. You've pointed out the things I had in mind when I wrote this, the darkness around Draco, the fact that he DOES see her, however in a completely different context than she thinks... You reacted exactly the way I hoped people would upon reading this; with shock. Thank you for taking the time to comment, it means a lot!

Lovely Slytheriness

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damn..wow, alot said..

Author's Response: Thanks :o)

Lovely Slytheriness

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Wow...
Must say I didn't expect that ...

Good oneshot ^^

Author's Response: Thank you so much ^.^

Lovely Slytheriness

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ohmygod.

i really liked this one-shot

probably my favourite one!

this is really good!

keep it up!

saffy

x

Author's Response: Thank you! So pleased you like it.

Lovely Slytheriness

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SHOCKING! Draco Malfoy's horrible!

Author's Response: Lol, I know right? That one's a shocker. Thanks for the review!

-Lovely_Slytheriness

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I love the twist at the end and how you truly keep the people in character. I'm hoping the fact that Draco lied to Hermione in the end means there's still hope left for him.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! But, ah... I don't know. I think Draco is kinda beyond saving at this point. Thanks for the review!

Lovely_Slytheriness

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Wow very nice. I'm a bit shocked to be honest lol. Stupid Draco...=0

Author's Response: Haha. Stupid Draco indeed. Thanks for R&R!

Lovely_Slytheriness

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I love this, so amazing. For some reason I can imagine Draco say that.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it =)

Lovely_Slytheriness

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oh my. there i was thinking it was just going to be another happy ending Draco/Hermione fic lol
x

Author's Response: Haha. Oh how wrong you were!


- Lovely_Slytheriness x

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Wow. I'm in awe.

I love the contrast in the final section. Honestly, it was just brilliant. The contrast between vision of himself "purifying the world" and the gentleness of "I see you." really was powerful.

The fact that Hermione was so sure of what she saw really brought across her headstrong Gryiffindor-ness - it was amazing.

Well done, great fic!

Author's Response: Thank you, once again! I'm pleased you liked it; this piece was exciting to write as I got to work with very different sides of Draco's character. Glad you liked!

LS

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I loved the simplicity of this story, and how easily Hermione saw what she wanted in the mirror. It showed her headstrong attitude and assurance of knowing what she wants. But following this, I can't see Draco seeing that in the mirror, because I never really believed him to be evil. I mean, he talks up to the "evil" side, but I don't reckon he ever had enough bad in him to complete evil tasks, or enjoy people's suffering, even if it is from what he believes, "lower" blood purity than himself. I just can't see it being his desire, but that's just me! I guess it's a matter of opinion. :)

However! Despite this, I think that him seeing this makes the last line very chilling, and it actually creeped me out when I read it, because it was such a blatant lie, and made him sound human and kind after the horrible image he'd just seen!

I enjoyed reading this, because you managed to convey a darkness to it in a very understated and subtle way, that really came through at the end!

I'm really liking your work! And sorry for the essay of a review! :D

9/10

Author's Response: Never apologise to me for leaving a long review - the longer the better! I absolutely loved this review - it shows that you've understood kmy story and intepreted it in the way i was hoping. And I must say I agree with you - I don't think that Draco's life ambition is to become a new dark lord, but this is fanfiction and so I can write whatever I want. Muwhaaha!

Again, thank you so much for leaving me all these wonderful reviews - and sorry for not replying sooner! Just know that I do read and think about every single review i get, they really do mean a lot. thank you!! xx

LS

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wow great writing and an amazing ending!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I appreciate it =)

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thats really really good. your a great writer.

Author's Response: wow, *g* thanks! :)

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omg! ending is so evil its awesome! great job!

Author's Response: haha, glad you liked it. =) xx

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oh woah! i actually love the ending. i mean, just wow. :P it's really really good. (:

Author's Response: Haha, YES! So did I =)
Draco is really crazy in this one. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

LS

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I like this : .~.
It reminds me a hippo for some reason lol. Okay back to the story! :D

Oh.My.Lama. What was that? Draco is insane! We should all kill him! Yes. Thats my plan. Not thats a lie. I could never kill Draco. I'd be too sad and so would his many fan girls. You know Hermione, Pansy, Blaise, Harry. Haha.

Even though Draco was very insane here I have to say it was very good. As always. How could something you wrote not be good. Haha.

As you can see I'm bored lol. So I'm reading all your work. (well the ones I haven't read)
So far they're all good. great. wonderful. fantastic. you pick which word. lol.

Great job once again! :D
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Author's Response: A hippo? OK then! x)

Draco is indeed insane. Silly little power-thirsty Slytherin. Tsk, tsk. He should learn not to be so mean.

But no, we really shouldn't kill him. The fangirls would (esp. Harry) cry. ;-)

I'm happy you liked it, and I love your reviews! Have a lovely day m'dear Lilly!

xoxoLS

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whoa, intense, and interesting. love it!!

Author's Response: Thank you! =D

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That was a very great story. I normally don't read stories like this one but it was very well written and it paints a very dark picture. I wish you would write more about Draco and maybe add another chapter to this story but I understand your need to keep it as a one-shot. I loved it. Can't wait to read some of your other stories.

~Amiria Malfoy~

Author's Response: Thank you Natalia. Yes, this is very dark and I would love to extend it to a short story or even a novella, but to be honest I don't have a plotline at all. I don't see how I could make it work, basically. Thank you for the review! I hope you'll like the rest of my work. x

LS

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ouch... mean ol' draco, huh?
still it's pretty good.

Author's Response: ol' Draco is some piece od work, eh?

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