I really enjoyed this story. Neville and Daphne is rather obscure and therefore exceedingly intriguing. He is too sweet. And she is exactly what I'd like to imagine only more interesting. It's the quills. That's such an odd and simple thing to fixate on that I am all but completely endeared toward Daphne. Neville is all too honest in his interest in her which I don't find terribly out of character in its boldness. She acts real Slytherin like, which I like a lot.
Putting in Ron was fun and appropriate, if random.
I'm eager for another chapter.
Cheers.Author's Response: Thank you so much for this great review. :) I love unusual pairings, so I knew that I couldn't resist Daphne/Neville. It means a lot that you like how I've characterized them. I hoped the quill collection would seem somewhat original, and I am very glad that you liked it. I don't know when I'll update, but hopefully it won't be too long. :) Report Review
Wow! I love your story so far, Neville is so sweet. I also like your Daphne, she's not talked about much in the books and it's nice to read more about her. Update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: I am so happy that you like it! :D Yeah, it's so interesting to write about canon characters that aren't that canon. :P I'll definitely try to update soon. Report Review
Oh, I loved it, it was just so cute! Great chapter.
Merry Christmas!Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot that you think so. :) Report Review
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