Update soon? :( Please :(Author's Response: Sorry. I don't get much chance to update but don't give up on me! I've got a story plan and everything. I know how it ends haha. There's a sequel too if i ever finish this one. Thanks for the review! x Report Review
Hi... great story, I love Sirius!Author's Response: Hey thanks so much. Me too. There will be much more of him later. x Report Review
I can't wait to see where this story is going! Im liking it so far!
Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Hey thanks for the stellar review. XD Unfortunately I'm not going to be able to update for a while but I promise to do it when I can! xxx Report Review
I love the story! It's really good, and I really like Billie :) but the whole James talking to her... that was confusing to say the least. But anyway, please update quickly!Author's Response: Thanks a million! =)
The whole thing starts out pretty confusing but it will all come together eventually. (That's the plan at least! =P)
I'm hoping to update in the next fortnight but I'm not making too many promises. I'll do what I can! XD xx Report Review
Great great great story so far!! Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Hey thanks Alexa! I'm so happy that you like it. =) xx Report Review
Okay, her being in Slytherin threw me off, nice twist! I seriously hope you update again because I would love to read where you are going to take this!Author's Response: Hey. First off, thanks for the lovely comment. I'm definetly planning on updating again so don't worry. I just need to get my act together and make up some sort of plan. That way even I will know where I'm going to take this. Haha. I've got the rough copy up in my head but it keeps changing. I think I need to commit to a path and stick to it. I might just go do that now. Cheers for the inspiration Princess! :) Keep reading! x Report Review
Whoaaa! That ending was surprising!
I don't know, my only problem with it was that it was so short. You could have put more detail in the beginning, like adding an agonizing walk, or maybe some flashbacks to the train conversations, or even starting out with the train conversations themselves. Then you would have been able to REALLY lead the reader on by letting us think that it was Peter.
I want to give it a 9/10, but I know this needs some work so I'll give it an 8. Keep it up!Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the great review. :)
I plan for the following chapters to be much longer. This one is supposed to be some sort of introduction to the story but I see what you mean. It is rather short.
Thanks for your suggestions on how to fill it out a bit, I was having a bit of trouble trying to think of something.
I hope you keep reading!
Billie :) Report Review
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