Reading Reviews for Lily Evans Dyes Her Hair
  
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Review #1, by NeverGotHerLetter The First.

27th December 2010:
This is really good I think, I like how you went from the childhood memory, and then to Petunia's resentment :) Oh, and Btw, you can get a banner by going to TDA on the quick links bar, and making an account. Then you can start a new topic on the requests bit. I did the same thing as you, asking for a banner on my summaries, but unfortunately, it doesn't work like that :( Good luck!! Oh, and if you have time, maybe you'd like to read my current fanfic, The Untold Story of Chloe Bonaccord and tell me what you think?? ~NeverGotHerLetter x x x

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Review #2, by someone___1 The First.

6th January 2009:
this was a really good story of the lily/petunia relationship. you really hit the nail on the head with this oneshot! bravo *claps hands and cheers*

Author's Response: thankies :)

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Review #3, by harrylilyjames The First.

6th January 2009:
wow, that was really great! I began reading it thinking 'omg!, no she didn't, how could you say that she dyed her hair??" but now that I have read it, it was really nice.
I like the one liners, it makes the story what it is, and its really great. I do feel sorry for poor Petunia some times, because Lily seemed to always gotten the spotlight while she was left in the shadows.
9/10- one taken because of the few spelling mistakes.
but really really nice job!!

Author's Response: haha thankyou!
sorry about the mistakes, i just wanted to post it straight away!
ill edit them out


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Review #4, by redherring The First.

6th January 2009:
That was just amazing. You described Petunia and Lily's relationship perfectly. 10/10

Author's Response: thank you!!

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Review #5, by rocken_stockins The First.

5th January 2009:
Oh, it's beautiful! The movement from one short choppy sentence to another perfectly shows her flow of thought and even the memories described are perfectly credible of Petunia! This is amazing and a definite favourite.

Author's Response: thankyou!
im really pleased with how this turned out


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Review #6, by heyITSme The First.

5th January 2009:
aw. lily and petunia's relationship is always so sad, i hate stories that make her seem like a fill in character that has no feeling, b/c she does...that's why she's so mean. this was a good story that summed up petunia. :) nice job

Author's Response: thanks
you never normally get many sotries about petunia and i just wanted to see what i could do


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