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Review #1, by harrylilyjames

1st May 2009:

wow!! I have never read a Tonks/Harry fic before and I cannot waits to see where you go with it.
You have a good amount of spelling and grammar mistakes in this chapter, may want to fix it up a bit or get someone to help you.
but its a good start to what seems to be a very interesting story!! seriously, I wouldn't have the guts to write something like this. lol.
good luck!!

Author's Response: Oh I know about the errors and everything... I will get back to writing in a month or two and edit it. Actually, I have my A-Level exams coming up in a week and that is taking up all my time, but as soon as I am done this story is going to really get going!!

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Review #2, by rab147

Two shards of a broken heart

26th December 2008:

Excellent writing so far! I am very interested and will continue to read as you update! ;)

Author's Response: I am glad that you liked it! I am working on the next chapter, it will up for validation soon! Thanks for the review :)

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Review #3, by vampirate_lycan

Two shards of a broken heart

22nd December 2008:

waa! sniff beautiful

Author's Response: Awww.. Thank you so much!

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Review #4, by redherring

Two shards of a broken heart

22nd December 2008:

That was a bit short, but I liked it. Good job!

Author's Response: The next chapter will be much much longer! I promise! So hang in there. Thanks for the review.

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