wow!! I have never read a Tonks/Harry fic before and I cannot waits to see where you go with it.
You have a good amount of spelling and grammar mistakes in this chapter, may want to fix it up a bit or get someone to help you.
but its a good start to what seems to be a very interesting story!! seriously, I wouldn't have the guts to write something like this. lol.
good luck!!Author's Response: Oh I know about the errors and everything... I will get back to writing in a month or two and edit it. Actually, I have my A-Level exams coming up in a week and that is taking up all my time, but as soon as I am done this story is going to really get going!! Report Review
Excellent writing so far! I am very interested and will continue to read as you update! ;)Author's Response: I am glad that you liked it! I am working on the next chapter, it will up for validation soon! Thanks for the review :) Report Review
waa! sniff beautifulAuthor's Response: Awww.. Thank you so much! Report Review
That was a bit short, but I liked it. Good job!Author's Response: The next chapter will be much much longer! I promise! So hang in there. Thanks for the review. Report Review
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