you really know how to write a story!!! I have been glued to this story for two days!! absolutely amazing! thank you thank you!Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm so happy that lots of people have been able to have as much fun reading my story as I had writing it. I even like to go back and reread it myself, sometimes, just because it's fun! :D Report Review
Sequel? Please please please please please please pleaseAuthor's Response: Well, thank you! I'm not working on one right this minute, but I never rule anything out, heehee! ;) Report Review
I swear, I have giggled like a schoolgirl reading your amazing story, more then anything else, ever! You have the perfect balance of romance, humor, plot twist and turns, and sweet little moments. I've said before, that this is in my top five of Dramione's I have read. Well, I'm taking that back, because this is #1!!! Hands down. :) I have read this story now a full three times, plus my favorite chapters several more. I am so sad to see this end, I am sure many people are asking you for a sequel, well I am too. Even just a one-shot to show what's been happening to everyone would make me the happiest girl in world! I hope someday you do decided to write one. :)
As for this finale chapter, I loved it! So happy Harry and Ginny are having a baby! I laughed like a loon at how poor Harry and Ron found out. I think it's really great that they get along so well with Draco now, I can see how in years to come they all will be great friends. Surprise and pleased to see more clans wanting to come under Draco and Hermione's rule. And the way you ended it, with them on the couch, really, to me, was perfect for them. Happy and in love, starting a new adventure together ready to tak on the world. Thank you so much for such an amazing, spellbinding, breathtaking, story that I have enjoyed for years. You are a very gifted author, keep it up. :)
~LunaAuthor's Response: I almost don't even know how to respond to your amazing review. Really... you've said such wonderful things! How could I ever express my appreciation? That you've read my story multiple times... and it's your #1?! I'm just so in awe right now... O.O
Thank you so much for your lovely comments on everything, including the final chapter! I worked so hard on it; with a long and involved story like mine, there was no way I was just going to be like: "the end." Ha!
I really felt like everything had to be delicately wrapped up. To be honest, I was feeling a little worried that maybe no one thought the ending fit, because I haven't had many descriptive reviews on it. I was afraid readers thought it was too boring or something... thank you so much for totally getting what I was going for! And fyi, like a complete dork I laugh at myself and my own jokes and stuff when I reread certain parts, heehee! I loved writing the blubbering Harry and Ron as they tried to process Ginny's news! So much fun!
Thank you again and again for your kind words, Luna... they mean so much to me. It's because of readers like you that I went out on a limb and decided to start posting my work online in the first place. It's a nerve-wracking thing for any writer. To know that readers like you find such enjoyment in it... that makes all the blood, sweat, and tears I put into my story completely worth it. ^_^ Report Review
LOVE how Draco handled the press, and Cormac, hehe. ;) Such a a sweet and romantic moment with Hermione and Draco dancing!! I knew what she had playing in her head would come up at some point. I really think you covered so much having this ball, like Pansy and getting it out there about Draco being the Clan Leader. Well done, as always. :)
~LunaAuthor's Response: This is for sure the best review I've gotten on this chapter! You hit on many things I wanted to cover, like the song (clearly Draco would use her memory of it in a potentially embarrassing way!) and how the news would come out. I really couldn't see doing it any other way, with Draco being as impetuous as he is, heehee. I just pictured him being like: "this is my life, you annoying media people. Deal with it." HA!
Thanks again, hon! ;D Report Review
This is without a doubt, the BEST most amazing love scene I have EVER read! =D I mean it, I think, no, I know, I swooned several times! You did an amazing job, and kept it very tasteful, which I like very much. :) Bravo on making me want Draco more than I already do.
10/10Author's Response: Well thank you very much, Luna! ^_^
This scene weighed a little heavily on me before I started it, because it was SO important to me to do it just right! Tasteful is exactly what I was going for, so thank you! I wanted something different from anything I'd read, something heart-achingly deep but still mild enough to leave lots to the imagination. I'm so happy you swooned, teehee! Report Review
One word: Bravo!
It's a really well-written and interesting story, and the characters stay true to JK Rowling's books.
Your plot was good and realistic and you made Draco and Hermione's relationship really possible and touching.
Your story is definitely one of my favourites.Author's Response: Oh my goodness! What a perfectly lovely review! Thank you, titesilve! I truly love JKR's work; I wasn't looking to totally recreate any characters the way many fanfic writers do. Everything you mentioned was important to me: solid plot, solid relationship... I'm so proud you consider it a favorite!! Thanks again!! :D Report Review
He looked scared?
He is in love...Author's Response: Aww! So much meaning in so few words! Thank you very much for all your reviews so far... I look forward to what you have to say about future chapters! :D Report Review
This is bringing out even MORE of my feminine side *I'm a girl if you are to dense to figure that out*Author's Response: Oh yeah? I'm a sucker for great love stories, myself, but don't you worry! This is an action story, too! Report Review
The last part was ingenious XDAuthor's Response: Why, thank you! I realized pretty early on in this story that I absolutely LOVE writing Draco, heehee. ;) Report Review
This is one of the best Draco/Hermione stories I have ever read!! love it!Author's Response: Really? Wow! I tried really hard to keep it original, but as I haven't read every Dramione on here, I always wondered about how good a job I did! I'm so happy you like it so much! Thank you! :D Report Review
You are absoloutely brilliant! :) seriously this was an amazing story, never ever ever stop writing these :)Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lauren! I really love writing... I don't think I could stop if I tried, heehee! ^_^ Report Review
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR FINISHING IT. I DIED. A LOT. I used to check this story for new chapters like, every other day. I finally stopped, and like a year goes by. I happened to come look today, out of curiosity, and imploded when I saw that there were NO LONGER ONLY 30 CHAPTERS. Is it sad that I had the number of chapters memorized? Great story, fantastic job! I will have a smile on my face all day tomorrow because of this. I might even blog about it :) Please continue writing - you are amazing! I WILL be looking forward to hearing more from you!
CatyCatAuthor's Response: Oh my goodness... you're so cute! Thank you SO MUCH for coming back to my story! When I finally started to post the rest, I felt (sadly, I might add) that so many of my favorite reviewers would never get to see it. It had been so long... I wasn't sure if any of them still even got on this site...
This review makes me so happy! To know that what I've done makes you smile... ^_^ And if you blog about it, let me know! I have an email posted on here, then I can read your blog and respond!
Love & Cheers!
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THIS.WAS.AMAZING! You should write a sequel!!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! A sequel, hm? I hadn't thought about that! But I never rule anything out, teehee. The writing bug for the Clan of the Dragon may strike again... ;) Report Review
Thank you for coming back to this wonderful story!Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading it! And for reviewing! ^_^ Report Review
I laughed out loud at the "ballsy wink" part. Love the story so far!Author's Response: Hahaha! Thank you! I can't wait to talk to you about it later! I'm really excited that you now actually know my writing style, instead of my simply explaining it to you. ^_^ Report Review
I love the sexual tension and the way Draco is so dangerously charming.Author's Response: Thank you! I prefer sexual tension to straight up sex, you know? The anticipation of it all! And of course, I can't not write a dangerously charming character... it's just too delicious to resist! ;D Report Review
VERY cool that you made Draco a werewolf.Author's Response: RIGHT??? love. ;) Report Review
One of my favorite things about your writing is your ability to add the smallest of details in the most subtle of places that makes the scene feel more real.
" and she caught a glimpse of a pale pointed face topped by hair that could've glowed in the dark."Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is your first time getting a glimpse of my writing I suppose, huh? How weird, considering how much we collaborate together! I've told you before, I heart detail, heehee! :D
Omg. It's finally over! Haha I can't believe it. I read this story from the very beginning and now after years you have finally finished it. Congrats. Beautiful. If there is ever a one shot or epilogue for this it would be beautiful.
-MiaAuthor's Response: You hit the nail on the head: it's finally here! Haha, some days I didn't know if I'd ever get it done; thank you SO MUCH for sticking with me through it all! And I def. won't rule out an epilogue... that would be fun! :D Report Review
Ugh, I hate Agilolf. While, he's talking, I can actually feel myself sneering. Ugh. Seriously, it's like me actually drips with horrible-ness. I can't wait for Draco an him to have a little conversation.Author's Response: This makes me happy, haha! I'm so glad I was able to create a character everyone hates SO MUCH. Sometimes I wonder at my mental state, that I tapped so easily into the mind of such a nasty bloke. Then I think: "Oh well!" Ha! I can't wait to hear what you think of his and Draco's "conversation." Mua ha ha! Report Review
Oh man, love the ending. He's so far outside of anything those people have experienced and they're finally realizing it. Looking forward to seeing how that comes together!Author's Response: Thank you! I told you I enjoy cliffhangers, heehee... of course it doesn't matter as much now that the next chapter is available! Yeah, I REALLY enjoyed writing the chapters you're about to go through. Maniacal Draco... muahaha...
I love hearing what you have to say about my story!! :D Report Review
Oh my. You updated. This is amazing! I thought this was not going to be updated anymore. I'm so happy! I started reading this since you first posted it! I can't wait to see how it ends after all these years.
-MiaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, Mia! You know what? Reviewers like you make me really happy, because I didn't know if any of you would come back to my story after I fell away literally years ago. It's truly amazing to me. I'm really grateful!! Thank you! ^_^ Report Review
OMG THIS STORY IS AMAZING!! i have read this a couple of years back and it wasnt finished and now one more chapter left!!! your story is very different from alot of other stories with very shallow story lines and crude descriptions! your story should be published! amazing and keep this up! love to see and read more of your amazing stories with draco and hermione!Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! I'm so happy that you came back to if after all this time! I can't believe you think it could be published... *blushes... I do have two other stories posted, although they're both one-shots. Please check them out! I haven't got feedback on them in forever, ha! And of course they're both about Draco and Hermione ;) Thanks again!! :D Report Review
I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hurry please!!!Author's Response: Hurray for excitement!! Thank you so much, it's on it's way! :D Report Review
I think your story is absolutely amazing!!! I had given up on your story as an abandoned piece, I am so glad you are going to finish this one...it is again...amazing!! I hate to see the story end. Till next time!!Author's Response: Oh thank you! Thank you for coming back to my story! I went through a hard time with my writing, but in my heart I just couldn't mark this as "abandoned." I ALWAYS planned to come back and finish! Report Review
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