No Eimear in this chapter:(

I always considered Albus as the smarter child but James as the more observent one. Just like how you protrayed him.

I really, really like this so far. Why have you abandoned it? It's a wonderful plot and your writing is good; you just need to proof read or maybe get a beta.

This was shocking, though. I was expecting Ginny to bite his head even though he had every reason to cheat on her. Honestly, men always think about sex. Preventing it will ofcourse lead to an affair.

But maybe she has an excuse. Too bad I'll never find out:(

Hoping you change your mind and continue,

Jay

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Hello!

Oh my, this is new. I've never read a fic in which Harry was having an affair. Very original.

You might want to revise your paragraphing; it needs editing because they are really huge chunks and are tedious to read. Dividing them will help the reader enjoy it more easily.

I would also like to point out that your dialouges should end in commas rather than full stops. Like: "Harry," she started.

Other than that, you did a brilliant job:)

I think Ginny and Eimear should meet on their own. Maybe Eimear should confess to Ginny out of guilt?

Reading on

-Jay

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uhhh!
gotta read more!
(this will sound heartless) I'm kinda hopping they'll get a divorce {i love hp+gw but...} so i can like see how everyone reacts! How will Ginny end up? Will the kids love or hate Daddy's new girlfriend? Will they ever talk to Harry again? Costody battle? What will the kids, once they are older, think?
OHHH you gotta UPDATEEE!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I decided recently that the very final chapter will be them in about ten years and how everything turned out. So you'll find out absolutely everything about everyone's lives after. I thought that'd be a nice way to end it. I'm so glad you like it! I'm uploading my next chapter now =]

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I love this story so far, have always been looking for something similar :]
And I think you just made me like Ginny.
Harry gets me angry, though. I mean, ugh, like, totally angry.

Anyway, thanks :]

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. There are two sides to every story though, so maybe you'll end up resenting Ginny a bit in the. Please keep reading. =]

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I like it, even though I don't want to! I love Harry and Ginny together, but I really like where you're going with this story. It'll be great seeing what everyone's reaction is going to be!Nice work, keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm not too sure how I'm going to have it end, but I have a rough idea, though that could change... Anyway, keep on reading. Glad you like it.

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