Omg! I love the idea and the way it happens, i have only one criticism (and i mean it nicely) i found a few errors and going over it would be better e.g. spelling/punctuation and you use 3rd person near the end for a sentence or two, but i really love it and its good to see another side to Draco in such a way! Is it finished coz it does say WIP X
~Jessiy xAuthor's Response: haha thats okay.. like i mentioned in my little summary, i wasnt paying attention to spelling. and oops about the whole perspective thing. thanks for reading/reviewing. it will.. i think. be added on. =] Report Review
I just read your little story. I really had to lough sometimes, actually I still have a big grin on my face. I love the way Draco finds out about his "strange" feelings.
Please continue this story!!! I'd like to find out, how Draco and Hermione go on!Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! =] haha
i will definitely continue. at some point.
[if any one has any ideas for me, feel free to let me know] .; Report Review
that is really gd i hope you complet it!!! i really cant w8!Author's Response: ahhh. thank you. lol i was really just fooling around one day. with no idea im my brain.
i will definitely try and get to finishing it. =] Report Review
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