Reading Reviews for Birth of the Centaur
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Review #1, by Karou_Marauder Birth of the Centaur

8th July 2014:
Hiya! This is a really interesting piece about centaurs, I never really thought about how they were created much before.

Some of the descriptions and metaphors/similes you use in the first paragraph are amazing. I especially like this part here: "Few left their branches to continue this ballet in the air, where they circled around each other until they had to rest upon the grass. " It just creates the perfect image in your mind.

I like how you've made all the young foals look up to the elder, Chiron, with the utmost respect. It gives us an insight to how the society of Centaurs works.

And that's a great way to tell the tale, with the Ancient Greek gods as wizards and witches and Athena creating the Centaurs to save peoples' lives. That's a really touching part, abut how the horses were grieving.

-Karou, 2014 House Cup Review, Educational Decree Number Four

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