I totally agree with this story. Good job

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i like harry potter fan fiction

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I love this. Its really well written. It has just the amount of wordds a sentence can hold without being drawn out. Its great.

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Very good. I hope to read more of it soon.

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Amazing foresight Elektra. I too suspected at the time you wrote this that Ron and Hermione were perfect for each other. I love your treatment of Ron, especially since fans and certain movies depict Ron as useless. Where did you go Elektra? We miss your brilliance here. Alas what you left behind is amazing. Well done!

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That was very good. Hermione was very in character.

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good for you. a very well told tale, nicely done. very Hermione-ish and well voiced for her

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Lovely. Nearly perfect.

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This is an amazing account of how Hermione thinks the story should go and how it's well, not. This is a very deep and thoughtful first chapter and I would love to read how the rest when they are released.

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That was so beautiful! ~*Tear*~

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that was really strong but you need a good banner but i wanna know how to make one

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This story is incredibly well written and thought out. Most of the romance fics are just WAY too sappy. They all go straight for the kissing, But this is different. The first true confessions of love. I really enjoyed this piece and I hope you continue to write. Happy writing! :)

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This was wonderful. I generally read Gundam Wing fanfiction, but am kind of getting bored with it. I thought I would read some Harry Potter stories for a change of pace. However, the first several I read were just painful, and seemed to be written by a bunch of twelve year olds who never paid attention in English class. The stories were cheesy and the grammar poor. (I have read enough stories by people whose native tongue is different than mine to tell the difference between stories by bad students, and ones by people who are used to speaking another language.) I was about to move on when I read your fic. Not only does it support my theory that Hermione likes Ron, and not Harry, but it was written beautifully. I could actually see Hermione writing it in a journal or something. Keep up the great stories, and this would be interesting if it was continued, but it certainly doesn\'t need to, and works well as a one shot.

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Really good writing...I like the whole \"what the charecter thinks\" idea. I\'m just not a Ron and Hermione shipper...

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i just wanted to tell u that this is soooo well written. i think u should continue!!!! i have checked over and over, but there is still only the same one chapter? is that all there is? please finish it!!!!!

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Ohh, this was fantastic! I loved the way you worded everything--it got the entire thing across wonderfully. More chapters? Please? ::big sad puppydog eyes::

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You write well!! Nice story

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