Wow.
I really enjoyed the way you developed the two characters and yet kept the simplicity of the story prevalent. That's one element that a lot of people can't handle well and you've justified it though the plot in itself isn't simple. :)
Xx

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wow...this is absolutely and beautifully written

one of the best one-shot dramione's i've ever read :)

Author's Response: thank you so much(: this means so much to me, and I am glad you enjoyed it !

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That was really good. I almost cried. And I'm smiling like crazy even though it didn't end happily. I'm glad I read this. 10/10

Author's Response: oh, thank you so much !
I miss getting reviews and I think yours just motivated me a bit more to start writing/ working on my writing a bit more than I have been !
I am so very glad that you enjoyed my story, and thank you for the review and wonderful rate :)

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Please write more chapters. I am wondering what is going to happen next.

Author's Response: Perhaps,
and thank you for the review :)

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wow i thought this was really good a sequel would be great or at least i think it would be i cant wait to read some of your other stories cos it seems to me that you have real talent thanks for the read it was great

Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much. I have been trying to write a sequel but it always turns out bad... I'll keep trying though.

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Wow... That was just.. Wow.

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Oh my gosh.

Wow.

That was excellent.

Author's Response: Awh! Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

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This was written very nicely. Nice job.
:)

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Oi! I wish it was longer, I've been reading one-shots all day and I also liked this one!!! It was beautifully written! The ending was sad, but I still loved it. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Oh thanks so much for your review and I am so glad you liked it!

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very good.. too bad they didn't end up together. oh well. haha but i really did like this! (:

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I liked it until the end. It could of been better if it was longer.

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That was so good! The only thing I would fix is how Hermione keeps saying Ronald. It seems a bit out of character. Everything else is perfect though.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Ill fix that. I just like typing Ronald for some odd reason...

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Interesting one-shot.

Nicely written

Author's Response: Thank you.

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That was a weird story but I liked it

Author's Response: Haha weird is good.. I think.. Thank you.

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Nice twist with just a one-shot deal. I rather like the way you put each bit of time into a few quick, consice, yet meaningful words. No wonder I am getting addicted to the one-shots.

Author's Response: Haha yeah I tried! Thanks for the review.

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Very cute! Mostly sad, though. I liked the ending!

10/10

Mrs Roonil Waslib

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the ten. I was going for sad so thats good!

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I absolutely love how you portrayed their relationship. This story is stunning, love. (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Im glad you liked it.

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I'm speechless. It was that good. I love how there relationship evolved it was just marvels.

Author's Response: Really? This review sure made my day! Haha. Im really glad you liked it and thanks for the review it really did make my day.

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That was so sad! I loved it! Keep writing! :7)

Author's Response: Thank you and I intend to keep writing.. Hopefully well. Thanks for the review and im glad you liked it.

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A bit confusing at the start, but moved into something really great!

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Oh, it was so sad, so angsty, so emotional. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thats exactly what I was going for! Thanks for the review.

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wow...that was such a well written story.
it just makes me feel sooo much emotion.
i love the flashbacks, the narrattion and the banner is also really cool!
congrats

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really tried hard on this. Took me awhile to get everything right.

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I really hate the tought of Draco and Hermione together. But this was a great story. Well done! :D

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!

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aw. so romantic, and yet such a sad ending. To tell you the truth, i really didn't get what was happening at the beginning. But towards the middle i got some feel of what scene you were trying to create. All in all, a very well written story with a sad ending.

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That was really, really good, and well written.

Well done.

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