I really liked this one... it was refreshingly realistic( well magic world realistic obviously!) it didn't involve a sudden happily -ever - after or anything, it was good : ) Report Review
Wow! That was amazing, I loved it! You managed to pull off Draco having feelings for Hermione, yet still keep his personality. I loved how you incorporated Snape, and there were some hilarious lines in there!
Are you going to write more for Draco and Hermione?
Cassie Report Review
This was absolutely adorable! I loved it! Report Review
This is really Hilarious xD Merlin, lmao Report Review
This is absolutely BRILLIANT! You are hilarious, and I think I've just found my new muse. :D Report Review
♥♥I love this story, it has to be one of the most amusing I have read on this site;p Had me laughing quite a lot, all the way through, I really enjoyed the dancing and singing fruits in the muggle grocery store. This cheered me up quite a bit:) Great story:D♥♥ Report Review
:) I LOVED THIS STORY! I couldn't resist reading it when it has such an awesome title.
The Draco persona that you created is refreshingly hysterical. The one-shot's written in a flawless first person, and Draco's perspective on Hermione's depression is so intriguing.
I'm so glad that you kept classic-Hermione alive in this story, too. In too many Dramionies Hermione changes for Draco.
:D I like when both characters are uncompromisingly themselves.
Keep writing- you're mind-bogglingly talented! Adding to favorites!
Cheers- Report Review
That was absolutely fantastic! I'm grinning from ear to ear! Such a hysterical one-shot! Draco's character was so well written, Hermione's Hermione-ness so well described as she's being neurotic, and the ending was brilliant. I truly enjoyed. You have a wonderful talent for humor ^_^. I hope you are having a wonderful day! Report Review
we still need to do that story XD (good stories by the way. i'm very proud) Report Review
Wow, I loved this! It was just complete genius, and Draco was fantastic. I loved him here. He was hilarious and snarky, but somehow he actually seemed in-character at the same time. Harry and Hermione were both brilliantly characterised as well. Usually I'd quote some of my favourite lines, but here there were just too many! 10/10 :) Report Review
Wow. That was great. :)
10/10. It was funny, especially the dancing grapes. I wish mine did that. Report Review
I loved this! It was fresh and quick-witted and Draco was so snarky! I'm a little bit in love with him :D He was brilliant! You got Hermione and Harry down pat too, really this was just wonderful :) Well done!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
You know, I was kind of unsure what to expect at first but this story is awesome. I loved your characterizations - Draco and Hermione, and even Harry had their funny moments and it was a delight to read. I'm glad you didn't make it super sappy or add an "ever after" after the happy ending. Draco is a very determined Slytherin and his voice was entertaining and witty. The most surprising part was Harry and Draco's unexpected friendship - cute though. Was the identity of Hermione's ex-boy friend important?Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I very much hate fluffy, sappy stories, so I try to avoid making mine so at all costs, haha. And actually, I wrote this for a fic exchange, originally, and the person I was writing for requested the Draco&Harry friendship - it's not something I'd normally put in, but I kind of like how it turned out. :) Hermione's ex-boyfriend was left faceless and nameless on purpose. She doesn't want to dwell on him, and she's moved on from him as a person - all except his one little comment to her... that really stuck. So no matter who he was, he was still a pretty big jerk. Report Review
i'm not gonna lie
that was pretty funny :)Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
This is so cute
Keep up the good workAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
This was great! I loved it, it was like a warm, fuzzy emo thing that just happened naturally. You need to write more one-shots like this.Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
Usually I'm more into the serious D/H stories (it's the nature of the pairing to be heavier and weightier, you know?) but this was absolute brilliance. I seriously would not stop laughing. SO many funny lines...how DO you think of them? (I feel like you must be a very witty person in real life) Definitely a charming, charming story with a rather charming lead hero, don't you think? =) In fact you were so convincing that I promptly forgot how ridiculous it would ever be for Draco to become Fred Weasley in spirit and for Ron to drop off the face of the earth. Although I could see Draco and Harry being friends...I like that. (They nearly were in book 1, after all)
Fave lines, in case you cared =)
"Granger was supposed to be Grangerish, and that was simply a fact of life."
“You didn’t Imperius her, did you? Or poison her, or anything?”
“Grow a spine, Potter"
“What can I say? I’m feeling different today. My hair is blue, after all.”
"Draco did not seek out Granger on Friday, though she was likely to spend the entire day looking over her shoulder as a result"Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I figure with Draco/Hermione, their stories can go only in two ways: really angsty, or really funny, nothing just so-so in between, you know? Their relationship seems a type where only tragedy or hilarity can result. I tend to favor the hilarity side... because it's fun to imagine them in ridiculous situations. XD I've honestly no idea how I manage to be witty at all in writing... I'm really slow at comebacks and such in real life. XD Report Review
lol soo cute, it really made me happy just reading itAuthor's Response: Aw, I'm so glad it did! :D Report Review
I loved it! Quite hilarious and unique. A bit long for a one-shot. Maybe it should have been a short story. Otherwise I loved it! Keep writing! :7)Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I'm rather fond of long one-shots myself, actually... I dislike chaptered things. Report Review
That was the best one-shot ever. I've read so many dramiones, not to mention written tons of them, and this is by far my favorite.
Hilarious and very well-written.
Thanks for the great read!
HannahAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you so much! Report Review
Terrific! It's refreshing to read something so wonderfully well-written.Author's Response: Thank you! :D Report Review
hehe, is there a sequal brewing? Wonderfully silly, I absolutly LOVED it, you've no idea how much it brightened my day!! I would enjoy seeing a sequal, but for now this is totaly a 10/10!!!^.^
~*Jeni*~Author's Response: Unfortunately there's no sequel, but I am very glad that you enjoyed it! :D Report Review
Oh wow! That was one hilarious one-shot :) It was so cute of Draco to try and cheer Hermione up. All the dancing and singing fruits etc. were so funny :D
Uh, I have to admit that I don't have a lot more to say - this was such a great reading experience that it would take me hours to say everything I want to, and quite frankly, I'm tired. x) Long story short: I loved it! :)
10/10.Author's Response: Haha, thank you! XD Report Review
This was absolutely brilliant!
Oh, please make a sequel, will you, i love it :D
10/10!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Unfortunately, there won't be a sequel, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
Very very funny :)
I wish it had carried on though! I didn't want it to end!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D Report Review
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