Not sure why I wrote Ron and Hermione, I meant Narcissa and Lucius, obviously. Haha, and to clarify that, I thought Astoria was a pure-blood, so I don't understand what their problem would be with her? Report Review
That was good, though not at the same standard as some of your others. I liked how you never flat out gave character names, if you had I think Hermione and Ron would be a bit OOC. I saw a few typos and errors through out, nothing big, but one was: "Itís is the most beautiful I have ever laid eyes upon". I think you mean: "IT IS the most beautiful THING I have ever laid eyes upon," Just wanted to point it out. Again it was good and I enjoyed reading it. Once again your story is filled with wonderful descriptions, I especially loved the Moon and his eyes reference that continued to pop up.
:)BaletGir Report Review
Aw, this was so cute! I love Taylor Swift!!! Great story! :)
~Emily~Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! =) Report Review
ahh this is absolutely lovelyAuthor's Response: Thank you so very much! =) Report Review
Absolutely beautiful. You've a real gift for this style of writing. You've set the mood perfectly; the characters match the detached and yet intimate setting.
xxAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I loved writing this one, because I really felt the emotion. I'm glad you enjoyed it. =) Report Review
Beautiful, beautiful story. Totally enchanting. xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! =) Report Review
i love it! especially the fact that her mother supported her
i love the song too :DAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I love the song, too. xD Report Review
Love this, and I love the song. There aren't enough Draco&Astoria fics out there ;pAuthor's Response: Thank you, I appreciate your words! =) Report Review
Loved it! There really aren't enough good draco/astoria fics out there, but this was great.
:)Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, hunny! xD Report Review
Lovely. Just lovely.Author's Response: Thank you so much. =) Report Review
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