Reading Reviews for Scorpious' Forbbiden Secret
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by D-Rock Chapter 1. I Hate you too or a Meeting of Fate

21st May 2009:
To much description with no real conclusion, although a great capture of a typical seven year old's thought patterns. Needs a lot of work with grammar spelling and punctuation.
A couple of more chapters would not hurt.

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Review #2, by Katharine Chapter 1. I Hate you too or a Meeting of Fate

16th January 2009:
it was ok i want more though

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