that was a nice little story, i always loved neville, i think he should be harry's best friend. not a jealous brat ron. so it was a good read for me. thanks and keep up ur good work and please complete the story hidden agendas.Author's Response: Yeah, Neville's nice. He'd be a great friend. Report Review
story was pretty good.Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. Report Review
I LOVE it!! simply wonderful!!!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! Report Review
Nice story, but why, oh why, do you have to pair Hermione first with Ron first in almost all your story...Author's Response: So I get the supreme pleasure of breaking them up. I've always wanted to do that. Report Review
Agh. Sorry about not reviewing. I've just had a lot on my plate recently. Considering my AP History class has to kill off Napolean by New Years and we were on the Enlightenment, we had a lot of cramming to do.
Anyways, enough of my misery, and more about Harry's misery. A good Harmony story, as always. A few of these lines are definitely being filed away, starting with the cooties line. Though a SWAT-style assault would have probably solved problems faster, that simply wouldn't have fit in the story...
Y'know, for some reason, I had a mental image of Neville pulling out a Blade of Awe and PWD'ing Ron. While that's probably not happening anytime soon, one can always have their fantasies...
10/10Author's Response: I know what it feels like to cram for exams. My last final officially ended yesterday what I passed the whole kit and caboodle to my rather satanic teacher. Can I borrow the Black Guard to raid his house?
Anyway, thanks for reviewing. I'll always remember you were the first to do that for this story. Report Review
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