{reviewid: 2764003, reviewer: 'Azrael38'}
14th January 2013:
Wow, I would be pissed about my plaque if I were Ron. Basically being called a coward forever is so NOT cool.
Author's Response: Well I don't think he'd really care. At first yeah but not now. It does say that he prevailed though
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{reviewid: 2732670, reviewer: 'trouble_twin'}
18th August 2012:
this story is very good
Author's Response: Thank you. Continue reading...it gets better.
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{reviewid: 2729760, reviewer: 'ajharrypotterfan07'}
9th August 2012:
well i read it through to the end but i stand by my original review. Very choppy, elementary writing, lack of grammar, and very rushed. I hope for your next story you use an outline and a beta.
Author's Response: Sorry you feel like that. There are other stories on this site may be to your liking. And a tip for you, next review be more careful about the choice of words. I''ve tried beta's but they've let me down, guess you didn't think of that. And to say that my writing is elementary is really rude and uncalled for
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{reviewid: 2729295, reviewer: 'ajharrypotterfan07'}
8th August 2012:
shocked isnt exactly the word i would use here. i cant really get into this story, it feels so choppy and rushed
Author's Response: Awk I'm sorry you feel like that. Thanks for the review though.
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{reviewid: 2726910, reviewer: 'ajharrypotterfan07'}
1st August 2012:
Harry seems a bit out of character. And im a little confused, have you reversed all of the deaths, or just the ones you have mentioned?
Author's Response: I made Harry to be out of character because I needed to, to fit the story. Just the ones that I have mentioned. Thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 2550914, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
Very good and well written story...I couldnt stop reading!!
I will say one thing though 'use protection' lol :P
Thank you for a brilliant story xxx
Author's Response: Thank you very much xx
Hey who doesn't love kids?
Thanks again for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 2550910, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
so very good. I knew Ginny wasnt coping but i didnt expect that. Would be cool if Neville was brought back for Ginny lol.
Cant wait for the final chapter!!! xxx
Author's Response: Ooh I never thought of that lol. I know poor Lou.
Thanks so much for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2550900, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
Thats so sweet and very nice. The necklace sounds gorgeous I want one!!
I dont want it to end so much has happened. xxx
Author's Response: I know I was so sad when it was coming to the end.
Thank you very much for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2550893, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
Very well done :). Bellas my fave character though boo she is dead lol. xxx
Author's Response: She had to get what was coming to her hehe
Thanks again for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2550888, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
Oh so good :) How the tables have turned. xx
Author's Response: I know indeed.
Thanks for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2550884, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
It is very well done. Now I know you are a Lilly/James Shiper but I think they are better off alone sorry!! lol. Still good work xx
Author's Response: LILY/JAMES ALL THE WAY!!!
Glad you still like it.
Thanks for the review
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{reviewid: 2550871, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
Very well done. I hope Molly forgives herself soon.xx
Author's Response: Here's hoping
Thanks for the review
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{reviewid: 2550865, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
oh!! its getting so exciting :) xx
Author's Response: I know
Thanks for the review
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{reviewid: 2550859, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
wow i was extremely shocked. I mean how? and why? Isobella dead?! Mad :)
Very good and well written.
Author's Response: I know everybody said that, but her character came to an end sorry.
Thank you very much. Thanks for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2550857, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
They may be filler chapters but they are still brilliant.
Author's Response: Awk yays I'm glad you thought so,
Thank you for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 2550854, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
20th July 2011:
Very good but Harry is bad!!!
Author's Response: Harry is not bad! Ginny is the bad one.
Thanks for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2540305, reviewer: 'HarryAndGinnyPotter'}
30th June 2011:
How could you kill Isobella !!! She's only 13 !! You could have at least let someone push her out the way or have her hit with the cruciatus curse !! At least she would have survived !!
Sorry but this chapter had me in tears :( You are a great writer though x
Author's Response: Awk sorry that I had you in tears but it was the plot from the beginning.
Thanks for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2538232, reviewer: 'sighsalot'}
25th June 2011:
the writing is to simplistic and everyting feels rushed
Author's Response: Sorry you feel that way. I agree that the first few chapters aren't as strong as the rest.
Maybe you could read on and see what you think of the rest of them.
Thanks for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2525246, reviewer: 'Bella%20Lestrange%20hater'}
23rd May 2011:
nothing could make me happier than that idiot Lestrange dead
Author's Response: Hehe, well she had to pay for what she did somehow.
What did you think of the rest of the story?
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{reviewid: 2523002, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
18th May 2011:
oh big cliffhanger :) xx
Author's Response: Yep and there's plenty more to come.
Thank you for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 2523000, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
18th May 2011:
Oh brilliant. Ginny the slut g0tta love it lol xxx
Author's Response: Yay. I know, such a slut, hehe.
Thank you for the review.
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{reviewid: 2522999, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
18th May 2011:
h very good. Man Bellatrix is evil...gotta love her lol. She has to die though lol xx
Author's Response: I am glad you thought so, yeah she is evil. You will find out what happens to Bellatrix in later chapters.
Thank you for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2522995, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
18th May 2011:
Very suspensful :) Keep up the good work. xxx
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it :D
Thank you will do.
Thank you for the review
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{reviewid: 2522988, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
18th May 2011:
It seems to be getting very dark :)
One question though.I thought that Draco was in Azkaban? xx
Author's Response: It is but you will read a happy ending.
Aha, yes sharp mind, but you will find out what happened in the later chapters.
Thank you for reading and reviewing
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{reviewid: 2522977, reviewer: 'courtneytate'}
18th May 2011:
I like the spells they sound right and do make sense, Its getting exciting now.
Author's Response: Oh I'm glad keep reading, surprises and upsets are to come.
Thank you for reviewing
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