Entertaining, well written, but no I'm not gay it was just a good read. Report Review
You should think about continuing the story because itís really quite captivating and interesting.
Keep up the good work =) Report Review
Wow! Great writing, and you leave it confusinh (in a good way) loved it Jessiy x Report Review
wait. did that really happen? i'm so confused... 10/10! good job!
-xoxo, rowenaravenclaw94 Report Review
Okay, so I'm not real good at the review thing but hey I still get first review dance! (Hops about madly).
Mmm, kay, on to the help part...It's a really good story...to short though and a bit rushed like you had more to say and not enough space to say it. Don't do that it makes the story kind of...wooden, in places. Grammer and spelling are great. All in all...9/10
Write some more. Report Review
I'm usually not a fan of slash, but somehow I fell upon your story. I like your writing style, even if I'm not a fan of the topic. Very well written and intriguing. :) Report Review
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