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Review #1, by xtinjsc Into the Darkness she fell...

7th August 2011:
I really like the style of this little piece, it's almost poetic. And there's just something about the way you strung the words together that appealed to me. You've written some really beautiful and stunning images here and I love how the story just flows so fluidly.

I like the mysterious feel of this story as well. I finish this knowing barely nothing about Astoria, except that she's flawed and anguished and I didn't mind that very much, surprisingly enough. Draco was oddly more mellow here as well, but it made the pairing work and I found myself cheering for them in the end.

Beautiful piece. Keep it up! You're such a talented writer.

xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)

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Review #2, by City Lights Into the Darkness she fell...

11th December 2008:
beautiful. i love it; it's very sweet, but a sweetness tainted by sadness and pain. and it's wonderful how it ends happily, even though we don't know what haunts her or what he did or their history, you still feel happy that they're together in the end.

Author's Response: Thanks sweetheart! :)

I was thinking about life and how people fill our lives at different moments. So, I wanted to get a peak into a girls life, not really knowing everything but knowing that what ever she has faced she should have an HEA. =)

Thanks for the lovely review!

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