Oh my Rowling! I have read and re-read this story about a million times!!! It's so good! Please, please, please, please, please, please, please with Scorpius on top ( ;) ) post more! Like, right now! Pleaseee??? I am dying here! and my ratings 10/10 all the way! Report Review
This story is lovely. They are so great together :) Report Review
awww this story is so cute. i wonder how the family will react when they find out about rose and scorpius. and what will they're parents say. i can't wait to read more soonAuthor's Response: Hm, I guess you'll just have to read on to find out! Thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
To be kissed like that. Heaven.Author's Response: Teehee, wouldn't it just be? Report Review
Well, besides stalking me to my class and then giving Binns some sob story so he can sit and stare at me until I feel a burning fire in my chest where I'm fairly sure my heart is.
Love that sentence.
And this is too sexy. I like your Rose very much already, her sarcasm, her un-social ways, the way she thinks. And how Malfoy, the fairytale Prince he is, goes right through it.Author's Response: I'm so very glad you're enjoying this! It's great to hear you like the characterisations, too. That means a lot! Thanks for your review! Report Review
I don't think I've ever met a boy or will ever meet, who would be so honest about feelings and not afraid to get hurt. Fairytale?
I like your characterisation of RoseAuthor's Response: Scorpius is awesome like that. The thing about him is that he cuts through the bullcrap. =) Report Review
Eeekk. I love Rose's insecurities and I'd love to see that continued throughout the relationship - like her shyness and how Scorpius helps her build up her self-esteem. I'm loving this story, however some parts read awkwardly. Not sure why. Anyway, update soon!Author's Response: I'm so very glad you're enjoying it! I'm just on a tiny hiatus at the moment, but should be back shortly. I promise I'll update as soon as possible! =) Report Review
Girl, you need to seriously update. Are you going to leave me hanging like this?Author's Response: Oops. Haha. xD Report Review
OMG, amazing chapter! Absolutely wicked!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! =) Report Review
i really like this! its really cute hahah
he is so different form his dad hahaha its cute!!
keepp going!!!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
I HATE YOU! Why the cliffie? I really don't like those. I mean, now I have to wait until you post the next chapter and I can't wait, because I have no patience. It's true. It's one of the personaltiy traits my momy can't stand about me. Which i really don't get seeing as i get it from her. But, jk. I don't really hate you, but please lpease please please please please update soon! I realy want to know what's going to hapen next. I really like Scorpius, but he's a different chracter here, unlike you other storieis. More warmer, and less arrogant. But I like it. And I like Rose, but she seems a tad bit shallow to me. Well, more in the 1st chapter than anywhere else. But, she doesn;t seem as much in the chapters that follow. BUt, I do like Lily also, but she's not as dense as she is in your other story, Tainted. She seems smarter here and I like it. I really like your writing too. You don't have any of grammer mistakes, which I'm grateful for, becasue those can be annyoing. It makes the story harder to understand. Well, anyway, update soon! GREAT CHAPTER! **1000/10**Author's Response: Wow. What a cutie! Thanks so much for such an amazing review! xD Report Review
Oh she did it!
Perfection, really you need to update asap, because you are amazing!Author's Response: I'll try my best! =) Report Review
Honsestly, one of the best Scorpius/Rose stories i've ever read.
Rose is so defined her, I love her!Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
okay I am officially in love with Scorpius Malfoy!Author's Response: Who isn't? xD Report Review
i love perfectly imperfect Rose is.
She's just so adorbale and real!
once more your writing is outstanding!Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, hunny! =) Report Review
Your writing is breathtaking! I really can't even describe how much I love it!
10/10Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! =) Report Review
...wow. i am seriously speechless! i can't even think of anything to say right now because it was that amazing. like just wow. um so pretty much you have to update like now! this is probably the best story ive read on fanfiction, and trust me ive read tons. so seriously like you're an amazing writer and i am in pure shock at how amazing and real you make this story seem. just wow!Author's Response: Oh my gosh. I just woke up to a crappy, rainy day, turned on my computer and this is the first thing I read! You've just made my dull day a whole lot brighter! Thank you so much!! =) Report Review
ok this is pretty amazing.
theyre sooo adorably cute! :]
i just want more! update! :]Author's Response: Don't worry, I'll update ASAP! =) Report Review
Love, love, love this story. =)
Loved the scene at the lake.
Love it all. Would love another update.
Great job! =)
--Kate/RPAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you 'loved' it! Teehee, thanks so much for the heartwarming review! =) Report Review
This chapter was so good. I THINK it's my favourite. But they're all so good I can't decide. =]
I really want to find out how her family reacts but at the same time I think the secrecy is the best. =] If that makes sense. Lol.
Keep writing. =]Author's Response: Haha, it totally makes sense. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for your review. =) Report Review
oh gosh this story is unbelievable. i am so utterly jealous of your writing skills that my sister just asked me why i looked green. (gettit? oh never mind I'm not very good at jokes lol. that was pathetic i know.) please update soon!!! it would SO make my day!!
ps. i am going to try to be wittier so when you update(hint hint) and i review again i wont make your eyes bleed with my horrid jokes. heheAuthor's Response: Heh heh. You are cute. I promise I'll update soon. You won't have to wait too long. Thanks, Lily! =) Report Review
oh wow!!! write more please!!!Author's Response: Don't worry, more is on the way! Report Review
God, this is amazingly perfect. Her character is so real and - dare I say - normal! She's not a complete prude, nor is she a total whack-head...if you know what I mean :]
And Scorpius' character...my-oh-my. He's around my age, you know...maybe a bit older or younger but still.
I'm thirteen ;}
Anywho: 10/10Author's Response: Haha, I think he's just a tad bit older than you, hunny. I'm glad you liked it! I hope you enjoy the rest to come. xD Report Review
Amazing story thus far. I read straight through the first five chapters without a pause! Your characters are wonderful, believable, and sincere. Rose is adorable in this story. Scorpius is *swoon*!! You write the interactions so well! I'd love to know what Scorpius is thinking, do you think you'll ever write from his pov? Extremely wonderful first 5 chapters. I'm so glad I started reading this one. I love all your work and cannot wait for an update on any of your stories, they are all amazing!Author's Response: Aw, sweetie, you're amazing! It means so much to have you say that. I'm really enjoying writing this, so you'll most probably get an update by the end of the week. I've been thinking about maybe having the last chapter as Scorpius and Rose POV, which should be fun, or maybe a few chapters in between, but it's really up to how things turn out. I do hope you keep reading! Thanks so much for the lovely review. =) Report Review
this chapter was just awesome. the kissing thing is very nicely written. well, and if scorpius isnīt hot... *grins* i just love himAuthor's Response: Haha! Thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. xD Report Review
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