{reviewid: 2381732, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
19th July 2010:
it was cute to see Lily supporting James. i can't wait to read more!^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2369075, reviewer: 'Kaytie'}
27th June 2010:
This is a very sweet chapter
Author's Response: thank you!!!
and thanks for reviewing
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{reviewid: 2367734, reviewer: 'PotterGirl100'}
25th June 2010:
This chapter isn't bad - don't say that!
I loved it :)
Author's Response: thank you
that means so much!!!
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{reviewid: 2291890, reviewer: 'lunylovegoodlover'}
29th January 2010:
Please hurry up and post the next chapter! I'm fine with cliff-hangers, but only if they get resolved quickly. Pretty pretty pretty please post the next chapter ASAP!
Author's Response: i am so sorry about the wait but recently i had a series of terrible events happening to me
but things are practicly better now and im going to update it ASAP!
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{reviewid: 2291886, reviewer: 'lunylovegoodlover'}
29th January 2010:
What tense are you writing in? Most of the time, you are in past, but every once and a while, you throw in an "is". I like it, but it's just a little strange.
Author's Response: well i am a little strange person
haha
well it could be a typo (i make those a lot)
but i never really thought about it before
i don't really know how to answer that
i intend for it to be present most of the time but i go into the character's thoughts a lot
i'll think about it more when i write
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{reviewid: 2291883, reviewer: 'lunylovegoodlover'}
29th January 2010:
This chapter isn't bad! I like it! In fact, I like it so much I'm favorite-ing the story!
Author's Response: awww
thank you
im am so sorry i have not updated in so long
but i am working on it right now to update it as quickly as possible
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{reviewid: 2249173, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
4th November 2009:
this story is getting interesting! by the way, i found some mistakes.
1. Of coarse - Of course
2. Unexpected Resolts - Unexpected Results (title of the chapter)
i hope i could help u. what has James seen? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: Thanks!
hahaha
sorry
i'm a terrible speller
ill try to update soon
thanks for reading!
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{reviewid: 2226714, reviewer: 'Malfoyfriend20'}
28th September 2009:
HI!!!I loved this chapter! so good!!! *hands you a brownie* you must update soon! 10/10
Author's Response: I will be responding soon!
I acually wrote my chapter
but it was rejected because of
well acually i didnt really understand it
something about sexual nature?
idk
ill fix it so it will update soon :)
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{reviewid: 2150044, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
26th June 2009:
great chapter u have here. i liked the fight of Sirius and Rosie. will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thanks
yeah i thought the fight would get people to relize that rosie and sirius should obviously be together
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{reviewid: 2149999, reviewer: 'kiwi%20anonymouse'}
26th June 2009:
cool dude wazza peeps who like this story and so quote my catchphrase:peace to the world bye bye aliens
Author's Response: glad i have another person who likes my story
that now i believe makes 4 *frown*
oh well thanks for the review
nice catchphrase
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{reviewid: 2129319, reviewer: 'Malfoyfriend20'}
30th May 2009:
aw! that was really cute! love this story! update soon plz! why are you sorry? it was really good! *grins and hands you a brownie*
~A
Author's Response: thanks
i was sorry because i didn't update in like forever
thanks for the brownie
the next chapter will be real soon
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{reviewid: 2125953, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
26th May 2009:
wow! awesome chapter however if i'm allowed to say, i think u could make the chapters longer. don't take me wrong ok? this is one of my opinions of this story. the others are that this story is great and now u made me curious!!! anyway what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thanks
and dont worry im not offended
i think the chapters need to be longer too!
well i am definatly trying to update asap
and dont worry the next chapter is coming really soon
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{reviewid: 2120667, reviewer: 'Malfoyfriend20'}
19th May 2009:
wow you were busy! anyway, this was a good chapter! *smile* can't wait for the next one!!! UPDATE SON!!! *hands you a cookie*
~A
Author's Response: i know
thank you
i know i didn't updat in a while but it will be soon
i've been out of ideas for the next chapter but it's coming out
well anyway thanks for the cookie
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{reviewid: 2120665, reviewer: 'Malfoyfriend20'}
19th May 2009:
it wasn't bad! i loved it! going into favs! *grin* don't listen to anyone if they tell its bad! it's really great!you have one of my stories on you favs, but i posted that story before my account got deleted so i am now posting it again...for some reason my account got deleted but not my stories...(don't mess with the weasley brothers was my story) anyway, going to read the next chappie!
~A
Author's Response: oh my gosh thank you!
im sorry i didn't update in a long time but it will be pretty soon
oh my god i LOVED you story on the other account it is hilarious
hope you find the rest of the story as interesting
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{reviewid: 2093123, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
9th April 2009:
This is getting interesting. I hope u didn't 4got that at their last year Lily and James are Head Girl and Head Boy. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thanks!!!
no i didn't forget that detail
as for what's going to happen next
lily is going to be surprised at how james changed over the summer
i'll try to update soon! :)
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{reviewid: 2093117, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
9th April 2009:
Great start 4 the 1st chapter however i noticed some spelling mistakes like "he usually reply with a (not and) stupid" and "apopletic?". Sorry if I'm being too harsh ok? just trying to help.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thanks!
sorry about the spelling mistakes
im a terrible speller so you'll have to get used to it
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