I wanna cookie :) you get one too, choc chip :) beautiful story you got here :) 10/10, love itAuthor's Response: Ooh cookies. Chocolate chip cookies! Aww you gonna make me fat! THANKYOU SO MUCH! XD Report Review
It is good :) have a choc chip cookie :) for it being awesome. :) I love it!Author's Response: COOKIESp I like em. I like em alot Report Review
It is a good chapter, actually. They must be going through hell :/ :( poor them... I love this :) 10/10Author's Response: THANKYOU SO MUCH! I love it when people review more than one chapter. You are so cool hehe Report Review
Aaww it is soo sweet, wow you made Lily 2 years younger than Albus? I made her a year younger than him, wonder how old she really is... I'm rambling, this is awesome, 10/10...Author's Response: Um, yeah. In almost every story I've read, Lily is two years younger at least. I just thought that because of how long she says it will be until Hogwarts in the Deathly Hallows. Hehe THANKYOU!!! Report Review
Oh, that is very sad :( but very cute... can't believe you killed Rose off though :( *sobs* 10/10Author's Response: Hehe I'm sorry. I don't like killing characters, but I've got to do what I've got to do. Even if it is a bit mean. :( Thankyou so much! Report Review
Great story! Are you going to make a sequel to this?Author's Response: Maybe about the lives of Rose's friends if peop;e think it's a good idea. Thankyou! Report Review
Wow, that's a pretty good story. When can the next chapter be up? Thanks for favoring my story, the next chapter should be up in the next week or so. AMAZING story, 10/10!Author's Response: Thanks. The next chapter will be up soon, and If you see this soon, tell me a name you would like to be in my story, it doesn't have to be your own, I'd like to include you in my story! Your story is great! Thanks for writing it! Report Review
I hide my emotions too, when someone dies. I know someone who has cancer and only has 3-6 months to live. Its so sad. 10/10Author's Response: Me too. I've spent my whole life around death. I also know about 4 or 5 people with cancer right now. I hope your friend has a good few months, I'm so sorry. Thankyou very much! Report Review
One small mistake, Rose would get straight O's not A's. An O is outstanding and an A is acceptable. I just wanted to point that out. 10/10!Author's Response: Haha I only just realised that! Straight O's. Thanks! Report Review
10/10 that's all I can say.Author's Response: YAY THANKYOU SO MUCH! Report Review
Sorry there isn't much to say. . . . but AMAZING. Oh and 10/10.Author's Response: Lol thankyou! Report Review
Wow, this is pretty amazing! I feel so sorry for Ron, its never easy to lose a loved one, especially a child. 10/10!Author's Response: Yeah, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Oh my God that made me cry! Why did you make me cry?!?! Meanie! Jk, but that did make me cry.Author's Response: Aww thank you! Be sure to read the next chapter when it's posted! Report Review
That was amazing, write a book!!!Author's Response: Thank you! Lol I'm planning to. Report Review
This is great too! I like the twist of Rose's spectre appearing, especially as the last chapter is going to be from her POV. Excellent work!Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted Rose to feature so that Ron could relieve his guilt and tell Rose how much he loved her. Also to say goodbye and put his mind to rest. Thanks!! Report Review
That's great! There's a lot of creative moments. I'm looking forward to reading the last two chapters. Good job.Author's Response: Yep, it's nearly over. I'm sad but then I can post more stories! Report Review
That's really good, too! But why are there so many breaks? YAY, I've been mentioned! Keep it up!Author's Response: Thank you! The breaks come when I post it, but I can't get rid of them. Lol thanks for all the reviews, it really means a lot. Report Review
omg i love this story its soo beautiful it makes me cryAuthor's Response: Thankyou!!! Report Review
i love it , its great. it got me all crying keep writingAuthor's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is validating now! Report Review
its great i love it keep writingAuthor's Response: Sure! Thank you!! Report Review
The flipping bit made me scared a little, but the rest of the chapter is cool. Apart from the numerous breaks in paragraphs. Good work.Author's Response: Yeah, I scared myself! The breaks were by someone who edited it for me, because it wouldn't validate. Thanks for reading! Report Review
That's also very good. You could do a chapter from Rose's point of view, what it's like in Heaven, stuff like that. But for the meanwhile, it's great.Author's Response: Lol that's my last chapter! I've got writer's block though. Report Review
That's great! What an AU story. But you didn't answer something. How did Rose die? Killing Curse? Even so, it's cool.Author's Response: Yes, the killing curse. Thankyou so much!! Report Review
This is sad but well written.Author's Response: Thankyou!! Report Review
It is so good. I cried.Author's Response: Thankyou so much! For you, I will post the next chapter! Thanks again! Report Review
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